it's not too bad. I like the sword as well
The bits I find odd are the location of his eyeball (which is rich coming from me
Also where his trousers/shorts are folded up on the leg nearest the sword hilt looks more like his knee than the little bulge where you evidently intended it to be. I think its to do with how the leg thins after the turn up...also the belt could do with being a bit less straight, make it curve to add a bit more depth to his torso.
Your stuff looks better than mine
The style of it is very nice as well, in a way I can't really describe.
A couple of hiccups though
However on B_W13 look at the hand. If you make the palm down pose with your right hand you see that the thumb is actually on the other side. Ooops! >_<
Also it could be a stylistic thing but I think the lower leg might be a bit small as well compared to her torso.
ON B_W14 I like the pose. The gloved hand is very good.
In terms of right meaning her right, left her left
What's the lump on the left hand side of her jacket?
It's far to high up (in comparison) to be her left breast, but it doesn't look much like a fold in the jacket either. The way its shaded makes it look like a definite lump
I've havn't looked everything in the directory, but 9 is really cool!
Eclipse, thats a very nice clean picture. Heh, detailed and undetailed. You didn't ask for C&C though, and I can't really see anything wrong with it, so I won't type any more.
Hmm, my stuff now I guess. See what you think of this one.
And the scan I did it from is here
C&C welcome. I did it as a sort of test for a game idea.
She's meant to be a Final Fantasy style thief. Does she look like it?
When I was CGing it though I thought she looked a bit plain...