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Jasper Beauclair
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#1 Post by Jasper Beauclair »

the game's plot:
you are either a female or male player. one day you notice a strange little cafe on your way home from school.
you step in to take a peak when suddenly a girl in cat-maid cosplay tackles you, addressing you as "master". you are passive aggressively obliged to order from her. when she leaves to get your order, you notice a bunny-maid in the corner. when you go up to her, something unexpected happens. how on earth do you go back to the cafe after that?

right now the temp title is creme cafe

please pick one youd like!
"spice cafe"
"we welcome you"
"please come in"
"let us serve you"
"please order quickly"
"welcome master" (itll be "welcome princess" if you play as a girl)
"please visit again"
"let me take your order"

you can choose one yourself if you think of something better than these
i actually wanted to say "cliche" or "project cliche" since its pretty generic
but i wanted a "cafe" feel to it

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Re: title options

#2 Post by Ran08 »

Are you asking about the title?

If so, Creme Cafe sounds nice enough! Hahaha. I'm not so sure of the other titles, because they don't seem title-worthy to me. Buuuut, I guess it also depends on the genre, and the story. If the expression is an important one, you might want to make it into the title I suppose. But still... haha, Creme Cafe is okay. :D

Just my 2c. :)

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