Questions:
Where the characters decent?
Was the writing good/okay?
What did you think about the GxG scene?
Any advice/tips?
Ps- The scene is a bit random, so please take that into account before you read. It'll be much more fleshed out when I've finished Elena's path. Anyway, I hope you enjoy =).
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(Rinoa)
Elena looks to her tail as it moves slowly against the floor.
Even now it seems despite her being in this form for a good while she still isn't use to it yet.
“Does your form still scare you?”
(Elena)
“A -a bit. I-it's still weird to be like this especially when I go to sleep.”
“I don't really even use a bed anymore in all honesty.”
(Rinoa)
I let out a soft laugh and gently trance my finger along her tail.
“At least it's smooth.”
(Elena)
“T-that feels w-weird Rinoa....”
(Rinoa)
“Really? Sorry about that....I never really thought about how it would feel for a gorgon to have their tail touched.”
I retract my finger from her, but as I look at Elena I notice her expression is more disappointed then relaxed.
“What's wrong?”
(Elena)
“N-nothing....I-it's just when I said it felt weird...I meant it in a good way.”
(Rinoa)
“Elena...are you blushing?”
(Elena)
“W-what?! O-of course not!”
(Rinoa)
I move slightly closer to her till our foreheads touch.
Her cheeks instantly go redder and she closes her eyes.
(Elena)
“D-don't look at me...please...I-I'm too embarrassed right now....”
(Rinoa)
“Why? Because I touched your tail?”
(Elena)
“Y-yes.”
(Rinoa)
I smile slightly.
Out of all of us Elena is always the one who tries to be proper and elegant, but she can get so easily shy.
“Well if you like it...then shouldn't I keep going?”
Elena looks to me with wide eyes.
I really am not acting like myself, but recently when I'm around her I feel slightly strange.
(Elena)
“O-okay.”
(Rinoa)
I smile and then gently use my hand to massage her tail.
(Elena)
“Nnn...Y-your hand...feels good.”
(Rinoa)
“I'm glad.”
Soon I use my other hand to gently rub the backside of her tail and she lets out a heated breath.
(Elena)
“R-rinoa....s-stop...please.”
(Rinoa)
“Am I hurting you?”
(Elena)
“No...i-it's just...I-”
(Rinoa)
Out of nowhere her tail moves from the floor and to me.
I gasp as it begins to entangle my body tightly.
“E-elena! W-what are you doing?”
My heart nearly stops when our eyes meet.
We've...never been this close before...and this is the first time she's ever been so aggressive.
“E-Elena?”
She doesn't say anything to me, but her eyes stay locked to mine.
They don't show any hostility though, but rather something I can't quite express.
(Elena)
“*Hisssss*”
(Rinoa)
Elena moves closer to the side of my neck, letting out soft hisses.
Carefully she bites into it causing my entire body to become numb.
“E-elena what a-are you doing?”
(Elena)
“*Hiss* Making you feel good...as you just did for me.”
(Rinoa)
She bites back into my neck, but this time her fangs don't sink into my flesh.
Instead I feel her tongue gently lick at my nape.
A small moan escapes from me and I close my eyes as the heat in my body increases.
(Elena)
“Do you....like this Rinoa?”
“I-I'm not hurting you right?”
(Rinoa)
Hearing her cute stutter relaxes me more.
I smile and nod lightly.
(Elena)
“I-I'm glad...I-I want to make my most precious person happy...”
(Rinoa)
My heart races when she says that but before I can react I feel her tongue again, this time moving from my neck to my chest.
I try hard not to let the others hear me, but it's difficult.
Elena may be shy but she knows how to make one feel loved.