Right now, my story "Winn Freddie's Road to the Sadie Hawkins Dance" is just about done. I've done a few revisions here and there, and checked it for errors and inconsistencies. And so I present version 1.3: the art-less draft. No illustrations or music, but at this point, I figure there's not *much* more I can add to improve the story. This edition will be sent to an archive site in a day or two, assuming the maintainers approve it.
I tried to attach the latest edition to this forum in a zip file called "sadie.zip," but the forum said it was an empty file. So until I figure out why, just put on pop up blockers and get the file from my annoying old Tripod site: http://gekiganwing.tripod.com
(I didn't make this game an all out farce. If I want to do one last week of improvements before I pester an archivist, then additional humor would be the last real improvement that might be appropriate. The story is humorous, but it's more quirky than anything else.)
Will do my best to follow up on replies!