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PostPosted: Sat Dec 11, 2010 2:07 am 
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Dropped... :(


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PostPosted: Sat Dec 11, 2010 10:12 am 
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First of all it sound really promising.
The bachelor I like the most is the Wood god, even if the wood, good seems cool too. well they are all cool.
The game seems to be pretty much finished, in terms of writing!

30 endings sure is a lot, who did you do that? the writing would have killed me.
good look with the art and the music.
I'm really looking forward to the character descriptions.

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PostPosted: Sat Dec 11, 2010 10:41 am 
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Yay~

I agree, I like the wood god most as well... even though he isn't the canon character. Q_Q
yes, that means that I am already thinking of a sequel... :wink:
...pretend you didn't hear that.

Yeah. This game is actually for my Vis Com project in which we had to make a visual novel of some sorts.
My friend wanted me to make an otome game and so here it is. :D
All of the writing was done in class since I wanted to do all the drawing through the tablet.

Yeah there are quite a lot of endings >_<
There are 4+ endings each bachelor, an ending for each goddess, 3 lone endings and a few secret endings.

Character descriptions will actually be up in a couple of hours since I am actually ahead of time right now. yay!


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PostPosted: Sat Dec 11, 2010 11:45 am 
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Being ahead of time always is a good thing...
And I have to agree with your friend. XD making an Otome game was a good idea! :D

I guess the yang Good is the canon character. It is kind of obvious but I really like the idea of the story.
Ying and Yang can't be without each other :D

It would be cool if I were alowed to write in callss to, but I don't think my teachers would like that...

what are you gooing to do about the music? There are quite a few good sides on the internet here you can find free music as long as your project isn't comercial.

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PostPosted: Sat Dec 11, 2010 12:10 pm 
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I am really grateful to my friend now :)
Making this game is so much more fun than i thought it would be. xD
We were allowed to work on our projects in class, so I decided to finish writing up the story. :wink:

Don't worry about the music. Both me and my friend are actually thinking about composing it ourselves. This makes it easier matching the atmosphere of the story.
We are also thinking of making a theme song for the game @_@ with singing, piano and strings.

By the way I have put the profiles for the bachelors up :D

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PostPosted: Sat Dec 11, 2010 12:50 pm 
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Mhm. I guess Terra is the god of the earth and a narcissist, that sounds like one hell of an interesing person :D
All of them seem interesing but...

Quote:
Zenith Lee Fibrus I love you Zenny!!!
I second that!

some things haven't changed so far.

making the music sure will be a lot of work! Good luck with that.

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PostPosted: Sat Dec 11, 2010 6:55 pm 
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I really like the god theme.. have always had fun playing a higher power, and it's a shame it doesn't happen often.

The art is wonderful, so cute!

I'd get along with Yang pretty well, I think. Love cats (yes), like to sleep (yes), hate high places (yes), love coffee (my beloved caffeine! yes).

Also, best friend endings? Sweeeeet. I've never forgiven Harvest Moon for cutting those out of the english version of Cute.

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PostPosted: Sat Dec 11, 2010 7:21 pm 
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Terra would be one of the strangest, if not the strangest, character I have created. You will find out why when the game is done. (or I get off my lazy butt and show you guys a preview) :wink:

And yes, best friend endings. They are just there because I felt sorry for the goddesses on being left out. I'm also thinking of putting in rival endings...

Progress Report~ daaaaaaaaaaaw i still haven't slept
All of Zenith's sprites are nearly done. :D
Also I finished making the sprites for minor characters.

On another note.
How do you record things on the computer. I wanna show a sneak preview of the game. >_<;

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PostPosted: Sat Dec 11, 2010 7:26 pm 
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Are you doning the character spirits in the order listed above?

you could record your screen using a screen capture programm if that is what you mean. or you could give us screenshots of the gamplay :)

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PostPosted: Sat Dec 11, 2010 7:29 pm 
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I'm actually doing Zenith's sprites first. cause i love him
And I did the minor characters as well since they don't have many variations of themselves.

Screen Capture Program, okay, thank you. ^_^

All sprites and a sneak preview will be up by Thursday ' 3'
wow i'm really ahead of time.... YAY

This is one of the sprites for Zenith.
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I am just curious to know if it's good enough or if I should change the coloring style or keep it like this.


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PostPosted: Sun Dec 12, 2010 10:52 am 
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YAy! Zenny!!

Well I think the coloring style is fine, but maybe softer colors would be better?
Because you have so many details, just my personal opinion.

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PostPosted: Sun Dec 12, 2010 4:02 pm 
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cant wait till i play it!! :D


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PostPosted: Sun Dec 12, 2010 6:04 pm 
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I love all the patterns in your coloring! It really gives character to it. As for the coloring it seems fine, though the hair is really brightly lit up

Hmmm Maybe darker and more shadows? And less bright highlights? Other than that I like it. :D

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PostPosted: Mon Dec 13, 2010 9:02 am 
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Wahhhh, Zenny looks so cute!

Wow, the coloring looks so dynamic.. major props to the artist!

I love bright colors. :)

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PostPosted: Mon Dec 13, 2010 10:53 am 
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N....nearly done with all of the bachelor sprites.... @__@
Ju....just have to finish shading the last positions for each one....

Also I will be needing a proofreader, other then myself, when I am done. >_<

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