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GxB

Turnip In Love

The story start in Japan.
There's a small garden owned by an old grandpa.
The old man hobby is farming, too bad he can't do it anymore, since the empty space used for building,
and a company bought almost the empty space in the town.
So he start planting farm plant in his garden.
There's some cucumber, tomatoes and many vegetables.
When the grandpa died, the house given to his grandchildren.
There's some children play in the garden since the grandpa is gone.
Then they almost stomp one of the plant.
Fortunately one of the grandchild of the grandpa showed up and tell the children to go away, because they can kill the plants.
The turnip (a female turnip lol) fall in love with the boy, and wish to be a human, so she can repay him.
Unfortunately she have Limited time to become a human.

You'll play as her, experiencing how to life as a newborn turnip.
who learn how human act and live.
Is she will be able to repay the boy? Will her love come true?
Will she be happy in the end?
Play as her and follow her days living with the three boys, adapting with human, socialize,meet new people and learn about the world...

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This probably not becoming a short VN
Progress:

Sprite: 40%
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Sprite Line : Me
Backgrounds : ElenaKiara
Sprite Coloring : Youngster Joey
Writing : night_serenade
Story: Me, night_serenade
Editing: Julie
Programming : Me
Music: ---- (Searching for composer! If not probably I'll just use free royalty music :3)
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if someone want to help, it's appreciated~
Since I like this story personally too, and I want to make it look good
any suggestions, advices, feedback too is appreciated~
Thanks!
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Main Character with the obtainable boys

Kabuko
Age:??? (looked like 16 years old)
Hobby: Take a walk under the sun, drink, and doing weird things (she's still a turnip in her mind anyway xD)
"Nooo!!! I forgot human eat us!!!"
She's the turnip who turns into human, she decided to become a human and reach her love.
Also repay the boy who save her.
She's a naive, cheerful girl, and bit clumsy.
She have an odd addiction to water.

Keita
Age: 15 years old
Hobby: Listen to music, alone, play games.
"Don't get too close to me, go away."
He's the youngest grandchild of the grandpa. He decide to stay in his grandpa house because he can't stand live in his hometown. So he decide to move and live with his cousins. He's a quiet boy, who just love reading, and playing games all day. He doesn't like to socialize with other people, and always fight with Sakuya and hit Sakuya with his small fan (?). But he admire Kazuto.

Kazuto
Age: 17 years old
Hobby: Read books, play computer, eat.
"No one touch my lunch!"
One of the grandchild, he decide to move and live with his cousin, so he could reach his dreams to become a programmer, since his parent want him to become a doctor instead. He's a calm, kind and intelligent boy. That's why when Sakuya and Keita fight, Kazuto always there for them, and this is why Keita admire Kazuto.
He's a calm person, but be careful, he will be angry or weird if someone mess with his food, he really like to eat.
(This is why no one want to eat lunch with him at school =_=)
He worship(?) books too, and always take extra care for books.

Sakuya
Age: 20 years old
Hobby: Walk, play, go out and call his "girl friends".
"Hello there, are you stalking me?"
The oldest grandchild. He's chased by many girls, and known as a playboy. He want to start a new life.
That's why he want to move and live with his cousins, since he's bored. It looks like he found new girls in this new town too. He like to tease Keita, or just flirting girls around. He's the one who cheer up the mood. He's an easy going person, and never actually get angry. He have over confidence in a way.

Ryou
Age: 16 years old
Hobby: All sports, and his newest hobby is following Kabuko.
"Where are you going now Kabu-chan?"
He's one of Keita senior at his school, but Keita just know him and never actually see his face before.
He suddenly appeared and make Kabuko, and the other surprised, since he's almost look alike with Kabuko.
He met Kabuko and quickly become close and friendly to her.
But, he's act so cold toward other people, especially Keita, Sakuya and Kazuto, and have a little of arrogant and childish character inside.

Extra character :
About 4 or 5, maybe more...
1 character have sprite, the others don't.

*sorry if there were grammar errors >_<
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Just a weird conversation between characters I made (not connected with the main story)

Keita: "What's with that Ryou anyway?!"
Kazuto: "Calm down Keita... maybe he's nervous or something."
Sakuya: "Huh, I don't care about that brat, but he's too close with Kabuko. Don't you think that's weird?"
Kazuto: "and they look so alike, maybe they're siblings?"
Keita: "Don't ask us, ask the writer of the story! *point at YuukiCrossPudding*"
YuukiCrossPudding: "M..Me? Well...He's actually.."
YuukiCrossPudding: ".....I hate spoilers, just see the game later.*run away*"
Sakuya: "....she make me feel irritated, you know that?"
Keita: "Why I'm created by someone like that... =_="
Kazuto: "There..there don't fight! We must save the surprises right?"
Ryou: "*suddenly appears* Hahaha, That's why you're all stupid!"
Keita: "What?!"
Ryou: "That's why people, keep seeing the updates! Maybe a demo is coming sooner than we expected!"
Keita: "Hey! Don't ignore me!"
Kazuto: "Hhh...this is bad.."
Keita&Ryou: "That because of him! *point at each other face*"
Sakuya: "Don't forget to check this project okay ladies (and gentleman too)?"
Kazuto: "-_-.... enough, I'll go home, and I'll bring our chibi pictures too, along with the sprites...I'm embarrassed."

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*I take all the sprite example in this one, until I finish fix them all^^, along with the chibi
(for the chibi if you want to look at it, just see my DA/DeviantART page. Just click the DA sign on my signature!)

The latest example of sprite+BG+interface:

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Blue Rose

Sorry for bad english, grammar etc. ;A;

Oh wow! xD I really like the premise of this story! xD A turnip in love? Awesome originality! Congrats and I'll be watching this story progress from the sidelines! :3

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Cute premise - make sure to make use of it! I know it's a short game, but I expect that people tuning in are going to want to see a few funny bits about how a turnip of all things manages to adapt to being mobile, wearing clothes, and interacting with people.

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Hanako Games

Yes, this is...very unique. LOL I don't know what to expect from a game like this but you're guaranteed to have many people wanting to try this out just to see how you're going to pull it off. I'm looking forward to this. Good luck!

@elenakiara: Thanks! I've been wanting to make this story since I was...12 or 13? Well I want to make it into comic. and now I make it into a VN! I'm so excited~ I hope it'll finished...

@papillon :That's the funny thing that I want to make in the VN~

@icebluehost: lol, well I'll do my best so ppl don't get bored when play this xD

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Blue Rose

Sorry for bad english, grammar etc. ;A;

This is very unique! A girl turnip of all veggies! I can't wait to see what Kazuto, Sakuya and Kabuko look like! Keita's looking pretty good so far. I hope you put up more character sprites soon. Good luck! I'll watch out for this.

@julie: I'll soon, actually Kazuto is finished, but I look it up again, and I think Kazuto is pretty ugly T^T
so I'll redesign it~ Thank you!
I'm spirited up if ppl want to look at this VN~

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Blue Rose

Sorry for bad english, grammar etc. ;A;

Very cute story. I hope you finish it.

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Keep posting pictures! hahaha!

@dstarsboy: I hope so too! Thank you^^

@julie: lol, I will post more, I start this with the art first, then the script ^^

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Blue Rose

Sorry for bad english, grammar etc. ;A;

CHIBI KEITA IS SO CUTE!

@julie: lol, thanks~
a friend in DA make the rough sketch, well I kind of remake it and lining also coloring it..
and tadaa~
how bout kazu? well after see this...I think his sprite is ugly, I'll try to fix it again
But the chibi from sketch, and line until coloring, I try to make it myself~
XD

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Blue Rose

Sorry for bad english, grammar etc. ;A;

The logo is cute! Did you make it yourself?

The Kazuto sprite is a little blurry. It's hard to see the expression in his eyes. Redoing it would be a good idea. ^^ Oh but the chibi Kazu is adorable! Where are you gonna use those chibis for btw?

The Sakuya sprite looks good too though I suggest tidying up the shades a bit on the shirt and that red streak on his hair so that it blends well. Can't wait to see his chibi. Keita has the ipod and Kazuto has the book. I wonder what Sakuya's item is.

It's all looking good so far! Are you planning to make a sprite for Kabuko too? And how does she get turned into a human in the first place? When this game is released, I'm definitely going for Keita first!

Really hoping to see some time dedicated to her trying to adapt to our odd human ways.

A turnip, huh? What... is she going to eat as a human? *tries to picture her living on sugar water and attempting to unsuccessfully eat dirt* @_@

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@julie: Yep, the logo I make it myself...,for the Kazuto,I'll redo it soon :3
and Sakuya too. (I know there's something odd in his sprite!)
xD

well my favorite is Keito too, lol
I don't know,maybe because I like him, maybe that's why the other sprite is a mess >_<
haha, I'll fix it, thanks!

Sakuya item? well look forward to it~

The chibis, I'll use it in the game somewhere~ lol

Yah.. Kabuko still in progress, I'm still confused what her look should like...

For why she turn into a human, because....hmm.. no spoiler 'kay??
haha xD
Thanks again for the advices~

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Blue Rose

Sorry for bad english, grammar etc. ;A;