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 Post subject: Luv<3U (WIP, otome)
PostPosted: Mon Apr 18, 2011 3:09 am 
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I wanted to make this short VN for NaNo, but I was too busy .__. Well, storyline, some sprites, some BG were finished, so I decided to contunue this project.

Title: Luv<3U
Genre: otome
Summary: You play as Beth, a young woman of twenty-two years. She never went on dates, never kissed anyone else and never wore dresses. She had almost given up finding love. And all because of the fact that her height exceeded 190 centimeters and all men frightened her.
Currently Beth has moved to a small town where she must undergo a medical practice. Will she finally find someone who is higher than her?

This game contains:
- 1 LI
- 1 rival
- 3 endings (good, boring and bad)
- a lot of CG

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Beth Goodwill
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Cheerful tomboish girl. "Taller than everyone else, with hair like fire, she looks like a lighthouse. With her powerful body, she dissects the crowd like a icebreaker cuts the ice. Always serenely like Colossus and elegant as the Eiffel Tower." by Caroline

James Livinsky
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Kind and well-known tailor.

Diana
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Cute rival.

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BACKGROUNDS SAMPLE

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Progress:
Writing - 30%
Programming - 0%
Sprites - 95%
CG - 5%
Backgrounds - 20%
Music - I'll find them soon

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 Post subject: Re: Luv<3U (WIP, otome)
PostPosted: Mon Apr 18, 2011 3:31 am 
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O.o is the love interest really taller than 190 cm? Wow. That's really tall.

Kind of bummed that there's only 1 obtainable guy, but I'm looking forward to this :3

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 Post subject: Re: Luv<3U (WIP, otome)
PostPosted: Mon Apr 18, 2011 12:43 pm 
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Aw, I was looking forward to this! ^^

I really like the character designs~ And of course the art too!!!

Now it's interesting what will happen in the plot.

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 Post subject: Re: Luv<3U (WIP, otome)
PostPosted: Mon Apr 18, 2011 4:33 pm 
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wow your style looks so unique! and idea sounds fun too
looking forward to it :)


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 Post subject: Re: Luv<3U (WIP, otome)
PostPosted: Tue Apr 19, 2011 11:52 am 
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Oh~ Thank you ^ ^

1 question. What do you think about short bonus chapter?

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YonYonYon wrote:

1 question. What do you think about short bonus chapter?


Anything bonus is good!!! >w< *lol*

Do you mean to make it unlockable somehow?

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 Post subject: Re: Luv<3U (WIP, otome)
PostPosted: Tue Apr 19, 2011 12:13 pm 
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Do you mean to make it unlockable somehow? [/color]

Yeah. If you finished 1 ending you can unlock 1 bonus chapter about characters past...something like this

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PostPosted: Tue Apr 19, 2011 12:55 pm 
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YonYonYon wrote:
Yeah. If you finished 1 ending you can unlock 1 bonus chapter about characters past...something like this


Oh, about the past??? >w< That makes it even more interesting then! I would say- totally go for it!

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 Post subject: Re: Luv<3U (WIP, otome)
PostPosted: Wed Apr 20, 2011 12:09 am 
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Those are some tall people, an MC that is 190 cm and a guy who is even taller? People like those would definitely make a person like me look small.
I love the plot and the art looks great. Will look forward to this! :)

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 Post subject: Re: Luv<3U (WIP, otome)
PostPosted: Wed Apr 20, 2011 6:19 am 
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The art and background are both eye-catching. i'm definitely looking forward to this vn, especially having in mind that there wold be a bonus feature :D

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 Post subject: Re: Luv<3U (WIP, otome)
PostPosted: Wed Apr 20, 2011 8:08 am 
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The art definitely looks cool, and the story sounds interesting.
I want to play! :D

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 Post subject: Re: Luv<3U (WIP, otome)
PostPosted: Thu Apr 21, 2011 5:41 am 
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Thanks :D

Progress report:
I wrote a lot yesterday. I don't know how much though. 'cuz my writings is like this right now
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And I'm lazy to draw BGs =w=
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PostPosted: Thu Apr 21, 2011 2:36 pm 
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Lovely art as always. I love bright colors like the ones you use.
I also noticed that in one background (second screenshot), most of the paintings hanged on the walls are from your deviantart art gallery. How cute >w< .

You sure wrote a lot on that notebook, I also like to plan my stories on a notebook instead of using the computer.


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 Post subject: Re: Luv<3U (WIP, otome)
PostPosted: Wed Jun 01, 2011 11:56 am 
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I'm still aliiiiiiiiiiiiive!!! oAo -Damn you, real life-
I almost finished text (~70%), but stuck with graphics. D'uh.

I did only:
1) One background

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2) One Event CG

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3) Logo

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Also, amount of words are so small. It's just too sad .__.

-disappear-

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 Post subject: Re: Luv<3U (WIP, otome)
PostPosted: Wed Jun 01, 2011 12:36 pm 
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Very nice art! It looks professional! Beth's character description is really interesting too! ^^
The CG is very unique! It's not often that you get a funny one. :) Beth really does look like a Colossus in this one :P


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