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PostPosted: Sun Jul 10, 2011 9:14 pm 
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 11, 2011 10:18 am 
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I think he needs eyebrows, his hair could start at some point to be more realistic (?) and add something to make it look less plain :wink:

I've tried to make with them:

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About the ear, it's too short for his face, isn't it?

And try to put some emotion?

sorry about my engrish. :(

Edit: the image did'nt apeared
better to use another hostingsite .-.


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PostPosted: Mon Jul 11, 2011 1:41 pm 
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OMG X3 <3
He has Spikey hair so it's supposed to defy gravity? Liek Naruto, Ichigo etc. ;=;
His personality is also really introverted so lack of expression haha.
I always forget the eyebrows x.x

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PostPosted: Mon Jul 11, 2011 8:35 pm 
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I tried color lines and using different size lines.
Gonna try shading him next. I know his arm and face looks funny

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PostPosted: Tue Jul 12, 2011 9:48 pm 
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Hayzel wrote:
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His jawline....it should probably start somewhere below his eyes.....

His right arm (aka the arm we can fully see) seems to be twiggish in the upper arm and muscley in the lower arm. Hair still needs some work since it looks like a wig.

His left arm seems to be twisting in some odd angle...

Ears and eyes are ok, though his body is quite toony :P
Just a Thought. His boxers appear to be tight, therefore he should probably have a noticable...bulge. Though, that's if you're aiming for realism. It's alright how it is right now.

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PostPosted: Tue Jul 12, 2011 10:20 pm 
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HigurashiKira wrote:
Hayzel wrote:
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His jawline....it should probably start somewhere below his eyes.....

His right arm (aka the arm we can fully see) seems to be twiggish in the upper arm and muscley in the lower arm. Hair still needs some work since it looks like a wig.

His left arm seems to be twisting in some odd angle...

Ears and eyes are ok, though his body is quite toony :P
Just a Thought. His boxers appear to be tight, therefore he should probably have a noticable...bulge. Though, that's if you're aiming for realism. It's alright how it is right now.



;-; I tried the buldge....ah crap I fail at digital art T.T
I'll try to re-draw it.

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But practice makes perfect; the more you try the better you become!

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PostPosted: Tue Jul 12, 2011 10:46 pm 
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But practice makes perfect; the more you try the better you become!

<3 Hopefully I'll be able to draw and make things like your sprites one day. They are sooooo good ;=;

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PostPosted: Tue Jul 12, 2011 10:49 pm 
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Hayzel wrote:
HigurashiKira wrote:
But practice makes perfect; the more you try the better you become!

<3 Hopefully I'll be able to draw and make things like your sprites one day. They are sooooo good ;=;


I don't draw those sprites, I get them from another site. I fail at drawing as well ;___;

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PostPosted: Tue Jul 12, 2011 10:53 pm 
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HigurashiKira wrote:
Hayzel wrote:
HigurashiKira wrote:
But practice makes perfect; the more you try the better you become!

<3 Hopefully I'll be able to draw and make things like your sprites one day. They are sooooo good ;=;


I don't draw those sprites, I get them from another site. I fail at drawing as well ;___;


Oh -hugs- Well Fawn said they would make a tutorial ^.^ Maybe his wisdom can shine down upon us :D

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PostPosted: Sat Jul 30, 2011 7:00 pm 
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Yay! I learned how to improve my line-art skills with Sai~! Thanks to D and cloud for their patience and showing me how things work o3o

Haha. So I'm doing the challenges from project Runway, this was the first :

Design an outfit using your night-wear and a sheet from your bed.(X3 I'm lucky cause I have black satin sheets)

I used my sheet as the main part of the dress then a my orange night shirt as a belt and chocker.

I can hear the judges nice. "All she need is some fangs and some spiderweb earrings and she is ready for the Halloween Ball."

I also realized I forgot her ear XD

Also my first time with color lines.

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PostPosted: Mon Aug 01, 2011 11:06 am 
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Cute art you got here! :)
My only problem with it is that her pose looks a bit too stiff, and the eyes seems lifeless.
The thighs look a bit off too...
(sorry, I can't give a full critique...)

Yet, it seems you have room for potential! Go~! :)
*cheers*

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PostPosted: Mon Aug 01, 2011 3:10 pm 
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Cute art you got here! :)
My only problem with it is that her pose looks a bit too stiff, and the eyes seems lifeless.
The thighs look a bit off too...
(sorry, I can't give a full critique...)

Yet, it seems you have room for potential! Go~! :)
*cheers*


Thank you <3
I'm changing my eyes back to my old style so I hope you'll stop by again to see them...though I'll shade the same so I guess I'm going to have to figure out how to fix it o3o
Xp My friend said the thigh thing too -sits in self pity corner-
I'll try to make her strut in her next out fit :3~ I'm so scared of showing movement in clothes ;-;

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