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PostPosted: Fri Aug 05, 2011 10:13 pm 
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Thank you! His hat was a total pain in the butt to draw, but I'm glad his hat looks awsome XD

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Lol, I loved reading your comment >.< I noticed his head was smaller compared to the rest of his body, but I noticed in one manga I read the artist drew her heads smaller, so I thought it was okay actually I was too lazy to fix it /shot
I saved A LOT of pictures of him too, except he is my bias XD! I actually want to draw all the suju members, but I have to work on the demo for my game T-T

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PostPosted: Sat Oct 22, 2011 10:46 pm 
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I finally made some time and drew fanart for vertan~
Still looking for more people to critique my art ^-^


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PostPosted: Sat Oct 22, 2011 10:48 pm 
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Omygosh cute cute cute cute
The only problem I see is the chi and the hands, but aside from that...
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PostPosted: Sat Oct 22, 2011 11:04 pm 
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Thats extremely cute X) Death_hug
i love the colours you used - esp on the hair

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PostPosted: Sun Oct 23, 2011 12:11 am 
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OmGodd, that's CUTE!! XDD
Gimme that fish!!!
The only thing I feel a little bit off is the proportion of the body. But overall... XD kawaiii

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PostPosted: Sun Oct 23, 2011 9:55 am 
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Lumen_Astrum wrote:
Omygosh cute cute cute cute
The only problem I see is the chi and the hands, but aside from that...
*squeals*

Thank you >///< I know I need to practice my hands orz
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Thats extremely cute X) Death_hug
i love the colours you used - esp on the hair

Thank you ^-^ The hair took me forever to color xD
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OmGodd, that's CUTE!! XDD
Gimme that fish!!!
The only thing I feel a little bit off is the proportion of the body. But overall... XD kawaiii

Thanks ^0^ I'm still working on the proportions >3>

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PostPosted: Sun Oct 23, 2011 9:58 am 
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Omg, that picture looks so cute ><
I love how you coloured her hair~~ :D


Yeah, I can see a few problems with proportions and hands. (Legs should be at least 1.5x thicker than the arms) and her pose looks slightly stiff.

Overall though, great job :D

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PostPosted: Sun Oct 23, 2011 3:13 pm 
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Omg, that picture looks so cute ><
I love how you coloured her hair~~ :D


Yeah, I can see a few problems with proportions and hands. (Legs should be at least 1.5x thicker than the arms) and her pose looks slightly stiff.

Overall though, great job :D

Thanks ^0^ I didn't know legs should be at least 1.5x thicker than the arms :o thanks for the tip :DDD yeah, her pose is somewhat stiff Dx When I drew it on the paper it didn't look that stiff ;u;

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PostPosted: Mon Oct 24, 2011 4:01 am 
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@Death_Hug: I can make some correction if you'd like ^_^

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PostPosted: Mon Oct 24, 2011 7:29 am 
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@Death_Hug: I can make some correction if you'd like ^_^

R-really? That would be nice :DDD

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PostPosted: Tue Oct 25, 2011 2:00 am 
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I saw this thread just now. Kinda lateee >3< sorry...
Here's some corrections. Not really good, I still try to learn proportions too. I made the position not too stiff. And made some changes here and there. Hope it could help!! ^_^


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PostPosted: Wed Nov 09, 2011 10:40 pm 
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I made some fanart for teacup!


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PostPosted: Wed Nov 09, 2011 11:26 pm 
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Wah your drawing skill improved a lotttttt in a short time *A* Your way of coloring is just too lovely! Be my teacher! xDDD

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PostPosted: Thu Nov 10, 2011 12:18 am 
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Wah your drawing skill improved a lotttttt in a short time *A* Your way of coloring is just too lovely! Be my teacher! xDDD

R-really? Thanks >///< lol my coloring? pft, I should be the one saying you should be my teacher! xD

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PostPosted: Thu Nov 10, 2011 1:44 am 
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Her hair looks incredible. How did you do that with so many colors? Anyway the hair looks great.
Her eyes are pretty. But the mouth looks a little low and off? And the pink bag underneath eye should get rid of it makes her look sickly or just really tired.
The posture is nice. The wrinkle in her clothes looks real. Her fingers are nice but maybe should work on the grip some more.
The fish is adorable. I wanna hug it's that cute!

Nice picture!

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