Snow Blossom wrote:
Yaay the demo!! It was quite cute overall, but I when I hit Preferences in the Main Menu, it suddenly "encountered a terminal error" and self-destructed. D:
Btw, I absolutely adore the piece of paper Sujin handed Bora. The chibis are so cute ^o^
Also, it might be a good idea to make a sprite for the mystery mastermind - something like an outline that's filled in with black, maybe?
I didn't know the preferences self-destructed >.< I'll fix that >.>;
I'm glad you like that piece of paper....it took me forever to draw it ^-^
Yeah, i was thinking about that but...I got to lazy to make an outline, but I'll probably do it later in the future.
Snow Blossom wrote:
Oopsie, I didn't see that we needed to answer three questions. D:
1. Jiseung and Minho all the way~ XD
2. As I said in my other post, the self-destruction error. XP
3. As I said in my other post, cute, and it ended on a nice, suspenseful note!
You didn't have to answer the questions if you didn't want to XD
lol you still have a strange taste XP and thanks!
CutieHoney wrote:
wow i love your game.
1. My favorite character is Oh Seunghyun
2. I don't think you need to fix anything
3. The demo is great, it has a good cliffhanger
Can you let me know when you expect the game to be completed, i'm so looking toward to it
Thank you! Um...I'm not really sure when I'm going to be done with this game, but hopefully by next summer ^-^
Poketto Kunoichi wrote:
1. Who's your favorite character and why? Eunmi and Kibum. I usually don't like violent girls, but I understand why she does what she does. XD I like Kibum because of his obsession with sushi. I laughed about the just tell him there's sushi in the kitchen line.
2. Is there anything I should fix? The textbox. I don't know how to describe it, but it seems...off. Also, only if you're able to, draw unique backgrounds or find someone to do for you. This can be forgiven though since I imagine it'd be pretty pricey, but maybe just a few?
3. Your opinion of the demo? I enjoyed it! The characters really made the story for me. In my opinion, they're the most important aspect in any visual novel. I critique I have about the plot though is how...calm Bora seems about the whole situation. I would think she'd be as downright scared and worried and having the thought of what's happening to her parents occupying her mind.
So concluding my incredibly short post, I enjoyed it! Will play its full release.
Thank you very much! I'll try to draw a few backgrounds, but I'm not very good at it >.>
I guess Bora is calm, I'll try to fix that ^-^
manga_otaku wrote:
Right, I finished playing the demo just now.
My favourite character would have to be Sujin and Minho. Sujin cracked me up with her enthusiastic "let-me-collect-the-surveys-to-find-out-info" part and Minho's personality was just cute. I love how he's such a pushover when it comes to Eunmi xD
I also enjoyed Kibum's face when it came to sushi :3Problems with the demo...well the textbox annoyed me a bit - like it was slightly too big and covered the characters slightly too much. It also began too close to the edge which annoyed me.
Sorry. I'm a freak. Also, there were a few spelling mistakes but I'm sure you'll proof-read or get a proof-reader to go through it for the actual release of the game
The demo was great, but it was strange how abrupt it entered and finished. Maybe put a pause at the beginning and end? And if the demo ends then you can maybe make a scene where it tells us in some way that it's finished?
Yeah...just my thoughts
lol glad someone likes Sujin XD
I'll fix the textbox, and it's okay, I don't mind ^_^ Actually I have a proofreader, but sometimes I pass over her changes by accident >.>; but when I release the game I'll probably have beta-testers to look for spelling errors I missed.
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