(P)lanets - the life of normalcy has ended!
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Woo! Congratulations! Going to go play it right now.
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EEEEEEE I'm so excited! Downloading right now <3
Will let you know how I feel about it after I'm done playing through it * D *
Congrats on finishing this!
Will let you know how I feel about it after I'm done playing through it * D *
Congrats on finishing this!
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woot! thank you so much for letting us play this game! well done!
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Congratulations for your game!
I'm downloading the game right now (even if I'm not a big fan of GxB).
I'm curious about the plot, and your narration style.
I'm downloading the game right now (even if I'm not a big fan of GxB).
I'm curious about the plot, and your narration style.
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CONGRATS~ And a big thank you to your bro that he tested it? xD THANK YOU FOR MAKING THIS GAME. For free, too. And with such an interesting plot synopsis. And characters. And art~
I...can't say whom I'd pursue first. I usually mess around with choices in the first playthrough and THEN settle on the one who interested me the most in the first nonsensical playthrough that usually gives me a bad end or something xD Okay, off to...do otehr stuff while it downloads and them play when evening rolls around and I am not interrupted by everyone 8D
I...can't say whom I'd pursue first. I usually mess around with choices in the first playthrough and THEN settle on the one who interested me the most in the first nonsensical playthrough that usually gives me a bad end or something xD Okay, off to...do otehr stuff while it downloads and them play when evening rolls around and I am not interrupted by everyone 8D
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OMG!Thank you, thank you, thank you!This game is the best!I played the demo and now it's here!My wish came true!^^
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just downloaded, and I've begun reading. Too soon to comment on the story, though the premise is interesting. However, there are some things I feel should be pointed out:
- the male skeletal structure has a few basic differences from that of a female. one of them is that the ribcage is wider than the pelvis. Unless Haruhi has something supplementing her hips that figure is impossible
- that first cg is incredibly distracting. active visual effects such as shaking should NEVER be used continuously while the player is trying to read, especially not when the picture is out of focus.
- the text of the second cg screams out "trying too hard"
- the backgrounds don't look finished. there are quite a few areas in each one that use a flat hue for the color despite being right next to areas with careful gradation, thus destroying most of the depth indicated by the perspective.
- her parents look like they've been stretched on the rack. especially the father.
- proofreading.
- the male skeletal structure has a few basic differences from that of a female. one of them is that the ribcage is wider than the pelvis. Unless Haruhi has something supplementing her hips that figure is impossible
- that first cg is incredibly distracting. active visual effects such as shaking should NEVER be used continuously while the player is trying to read, especially not when the picture is out of focus.
- the text of the second cg screams out "trying too hard"
- the backgrounds don't look finished. there are quite a few areas in each one that use a flat hue for the color despite being right next to areas with careful gradation, thus destroying most of the depth indicated by the perspective.
- her parents look like they've been stretched on the rack. especially the father.
- proofreading.
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Thanks all! I hope you have fun playing!
@HanaMori
I will upload to Mediafire later today as soon as I get home from school, sorry for the problems!
@aya001
So glad you are having fun :'D!
@KimiYoriBaka
Wow you're a little negative huh... It's too bad that you are not able to find a single positive thing to comment.
@HanaMori
I will upload to Mediafire later today as soon as I get home from school, sorry for the problems!
@aya001
So glad you are having fun :'D!
@KimiYoriBaka
Wow you're a little negative huh... It's too bad that you are not able to find a single positive thing to comment.
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She said the premise was interesting... that sounds positive to me...teacup wrote:Wow you're a little negative huh... It's too bad that you are not able to find a single positive thing to comment.
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Holy *&^&* This is out??!!
Yes Entertaining games!!!
I get to pester my friends to play this well once I finish so i can ruin it all for them XD
Thank you and great Freaking awesome job on finishing this!~ XD
Yes Entertaining games!!!
I get to pester my friends to play this well once I finish so i can ruin it all for them XD
Thank you and great Freaking awesome job on finishing this!~ XD
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IT'S DONE!?!?!? I'm so happy for you!
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I'm a tad bit in and I love it so far. I know I played the demo but it was so close to release that I didn't really have much time to say anything about it.
My only real problems are some stylistic choices with the art, namely Haruhi's figure (which can be suspended of disbelief with her position and some padding in her outfit or hormone pills, as well as the style here) as well and some minor fuzziness of the backgrounds in comparison to the sprites. I would have also liked some more... vibrant differences in the expressions of the sprites as well. Personally I was somewhat distracted by the name text, but that is so minor it's not much of a problem.
I didn't have a problem with the first and second CGs myself. It's so short that it isn't something that can be easily overlooked. And, I do like the narration, which seems a bit too accurate to how most kids I know in high school acted actually, though this is a very good thing. And the story is rather good as far in as I am. But I have to say I LOVE the music here! It fits the scenes very well and I actually wouldn't mind just listening to it by itself.
Even with the, admittedly minor, things it's more than enjoyable so far, especially when I take into consideration that this is a free project. I've had my share of times when I have bought a game that is far less enjoyable, so I take what I get more than happily!
My only real problems are some stylistic choices with the art, namely Haruhi's figure (which can be suspended of disbelief with her position and some padding in her outfit or hormone pills, as well as the style here) as well and some minor fuzziness of the backgrounds in comparison to the sprites. I would have also liked some more... vibrant differences in the expressions of the sprites as well. Personally I was somewhat distracted by the name text, but that is so minor it's not much of a problem.
I didn't have a problem with the first and second CGs myself. It's so short that it isn't something that can be easily overlooked. And, I do like the narration, which seems a bit too accurate to how most kids I know in high school acted actually, though this is a very good thing. And the story is rather good as far in as I am. But I have to say I LOVE the music here! It fits the scenes very well and I actually wouldn't mind just listening to it by itself.
Even with the, admittedly minor, things it's more than enjoyable so far, especially when I take into consideration that this is a free project. I've had my share of times when I have bought a game that is far less enjoyable, so I take what I get more than happily!
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WOOOOOW. Awesoooome.
I'm tempted to play it during my homework. XD
I'm tempted to play it during my homework. XD
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