Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

[BlueFeather]

it really been a while since i drew.. about 2 years and i just started again..

this is my sketch of Tsuraga Ren <3


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and this i drew and colored it it in Photoshop that's why it's a bit shaky, sadly i am not really good at the coloring either -_-''
any way people say it looks like Captain Tsubasa?does it really?



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btw this is amazing Niki *thumbs up*

[Anthy]

WIP section of a WIP cover page.
The rest of the page (and this too somewhat) needs perspective-tweaking. I'm probably trying to draw beyond my ability...

[Auro-Cyanide]

Background. Needs critique please ^_^

[OtomeWeekend]

@Auro: not really a critique but i suddenly have a deja vu about our classroom xD

[Auro-Cyanide]

@Auro: not really a critique but i suddenly have a deja vu about our classroom xD

Well. I'm going to take that as a good sign

[Watercolorheart]

I always feel weird when someone does that kind of classroom background that looks like every other classroom background in every other VN, ever, and the character sprites are impaled on the desks in order to stand at the wrong perspective. >_<

I would render it purely from the side or from the front of the classroom, or draw the sprites specifically to fit that background by sitting on the desks or leaning against them.

Anthy: The perspective looks fine from here.

[Auro-Cyanide]

I always feel weird when someone does that kind of classroom background that looks like every other classroom background in every other VN, ever, and the character sprites are impaled on the desks in order to stand at the wrong perspective. >_<

I would render it purely from the side or from the front of the classroom, or draw the sprites specifically to fit that background by sitting on the desks or leaning against them.

Anthy: The perspective looks fine from here.

Well, most Japanese classrooms do look exactly the same, no matter where you are in the country ^^' Pretty much every photo I looked at was like that. Since the rooms are quite small and the sprites generally stay the same size, it can be a little awkward. Not enough of a worry for me to redo it or draw more sprites though.

[HigurashiKira]

Dropping a little something here.
A long time ago I wrote a story featuring 2 detectives: 1 a PI, the other worked for the PD. Well, one of the endings had the PD Detectve rush off somewhere even after all the warnings from his fellow detectives. He dies after getting shot in the chest. The person who finds him? The PI, who by then had gotten close to him. So, here's that scene. (albeit, rather crappily)

"Why couldn't you have waited for me to back you up? Why did you come alone, damnit?!"

[Niki]

@BlueFeather Haha thanks x3

This place makes me so envious >< Everyone has such good coloring and drawing skills orz
I (tried to) do a background; it's just a simple corridor though ^^;

[OtomeWeekend]

Well, most Japanese classrooms do look exactly the same, no matter where you are in the country ^^' Pretty much every photo I looked at was like that. Since the rooms are quite small and the sprites generally stay the same size, it can be a little awkward. Not enough of a worry for me to redo it or draw more sprites though.

Well, that goes for the public schools x3 I dunno about private schools... the all girls school near our place here has gorgeous facility as the rumors goes *drools*

[Auro-Cyanide]

Well, most Japanese classrooms do look exactly the same, no matter where you are in the country ^^' Pretty much every photo I looked at was like that. Since the rooms are quite small and the sprites generally stay the same size, it can be a little awkward. Not enough of a worry for me to redo it or draw more sprites though.

Well, that goes for the public schools x3 I dunno about private schools... the all girls school near our place here has gorgeous facility as the rumors goes *drools*

True, and I can only base that on the photos I have seen. It's not like I've recently taken a tour of Japan looking at schools XD Though classroom don't vary much here. I went to a very prestigious all boy school for exam revision once and their classrooms were pretty much the same. Hell, even my university classrooms looked pretty similar. Nothing much changed.

[Celestie]

Hm, yeah, outlined something yesterday as per request of a friend of mine. It's....a fanart, sorts of. The girl is my friend's OC, but the gyus are from her favorite manga Aphorism (which I love, too), so, yeah, credits there as well. And I forever fail at tuxedos and males. OTL.

[thekobester11]

Please comment about my artwork, I've been trying to make my own style. This is a prototype of my main protag whose gonna appear in my visual novel... Critique please

[Auro-Cyanide]

@thekobester11 I don't know what's going on with the right eye, but it looks a little, ah, complicated. There are too many lines.

[Tag-]

@Celestie
I really like this picture, you've done a really nice job~ The expressions and clothes look great, especially the folds. (And may I say that I particularly love that rose and that girl's gorgeous dress )

However, I can still see a few anatomical mistakes, particularly in their hands and the sizes of the heads (the guy on the right's head looks a little small, for example).
Also, with the girl's face, you have her body facing the right, and her face facing the front, yet her nose is implied to be facing the left.

That's all I've got to say though, great job