Posting updated version of the script.
Forgive me, but I'm writing a script I would like someone to take a look, and tell if it's worth continuing. If this isn't the right place, please tell me and I'll delete it. The script is here for download. I'm writing it in a way it'll be better to make into an actual game script later on. I kind of have an idea of what's going to happen, but I would rather only discuss it by PM.
The game would be called "Corrupted Data", for reasons explained early in the game.
Right now, the protagonist's gender is left in the open. I initially I intended the game to be BL, but come to think about it, it could be otome as well. Or it could be left ambiguous wheter the protagonist is male or female.
The protagonist is haunting a school (I'm calling it boarding school, but it's actually a school with dorms - and only guys can stay at the dorms), and counts with the help of a medium to find out why s/he's not able to move on to the afterlife. Then a new student who seems to be a medium as well shows up, a second ghost starts haunting the school and things go to hell pretty fast.
I'm aiming for mystery, romance and it's set in Japan for practical reasons: I could only find background CGs from Japanese sites. I will be doing my research, though.
Could someone please help me? It's not recruiting/betaing yet because I don't know wheter I should continue to work on that game or not.
(The lyrics previously in the script were taken from http://www.songs-lyrics.com/lyrics_page6.html
, but I changed it for a nursery rhyme I found online).