Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

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#3256 Post by HigurashiKira »

I hate how I can only make a very good drawing about once a month. This one is for September I guess.
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#3257 Post by Watercolorheart »

I was approached to do a sprite kit, so I went with a male one because 1) I haven't done anime in a while and 2) they only had girls, mostly, and that would balance things out just a tad.

I can't see anything wrong with it, but it's always hard to tell... Horizontal flip doesn't show everything.'
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HigurashiKira wrote:I hate how I can only make a very good drawing about once a month.
Ah, it's stylized so it's hard to say... but I made a quick redline for you. The little blue lines are what I would go over again, the red areas to the things that jumped out at me. There's not much to change, but where the skirt wrinkles in, that's where the thigh would actually be, given the thickness of the calves.
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Tsundere Poweeeeeeer!!! >_<
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LVUER, you make such tasty tasty lolies... Crispy indeed.

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#3261 Post by Sapphi »

Like a churro!

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#3262 Post by Auro-Cyanide »

Another sprite I did for Komi-Tsuku. He is the only guy that I had to do that appears in the uniform. I was trying to make him bishie but masculine at the same time?
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#3263 Post by Sapphi »

Aww, he's cute! >w<

I think you have a good balance... but there's something off about his shoulders... I think they are broad enough, but his collarbone is way higher than the joints of his arms, when they should be on the same level. He also seems to have a really long torso, but part of that might be a visual trick of the uniform.
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#3264 Post by Auro-Cyanide »

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Thanks ^^ Yeah, I think I might remove those lines. It's not like I need them there. Thanks again <3

Another background. I'm aware of a couple faults (and I'm still having issues with colours) but feel free to point out stuff incase I don't know about it :)
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#3265 Post by Watercolorheart »

Sapphi wrote:but his collarbone is way higher than the joints of his arms, when they should be on the same level. He also seems to have a really long torso,
Oops, I think I made those same mistakes...
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#3266 Post by Niki »

@Auro-Cyanide
Um, I think the Japanese on the sign in your getabako background is in reverse? >< I don't think it really matters though, it's so small. Other than that, it's really well done! I'm envious. ._.
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#3267 Post by Auro-Cyanide »

@Niki
Ooo, you're a sharp one XD Actually most of the posters and things are only placeholders until I have time to create my own with pseudo japanese. For now I have just used real posters, but because I don't know what they say, I flipped them and painted over them.

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#3268 Post by [insert name here] »

Hey all, nice to meet you.
I'm still new here and also in drawing world (even I've been an artists for 7 years...) ^^'a
Here's one of my drawings. Critiques and comments are much appreciated -w-
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(sorry for the blurry image, err... I just use my corby cellphone and don't have any scanner :oops: )

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#3269 Post by Chorvaqueen »

my last visit was around 2009 so I'm technically not really new here but I still am
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#3270 Post by CosmicKitty »

These are all still works in progress... but i thought I'd post what I have so far :)
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