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PostPosted: Mon Nov 07, 2011 11:03 am 
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Well since there's hardly any yuri VNs I thought I'd try my hand at making one. This is a short comedy/romance/drama with the goal of utilizing a large number of CGs and non-static sprites to tell the story, so it'll take a little longer than my other projects to complete.

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Aria Reid: The protagonist. She and her family just recently moved into her grandfathers creepy old house, which she isn't happy about.

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Melody Rococo: Aria's best friend and classmate. She is very smart, but also rather shy, worrying about what others think of her. She gets a bit jealous of Lyria's flirtations and starts to notice her own feelings towards Aria.
*not too sure on her design yet.

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Lyria: A demon who spent the past 50 years trapped in a stone. She is eccentric, flirtatious and somewhat of a mystery. The human world intrigues her and she can often act very childish. She rarely hesitates in terms of romance or voicing her dislike of things.

Sid: Sid is a small Wyvern and Lyria's familiar. He takes a quick liking to Melody, who is a stark contrast to his master's brainless and hasty nature.

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Scherza: Current Queen of the demon realm. She has a very icy personality and little like for humans.

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Ms. Reid: A hardworking single schoolteacher.

Silas Reid: Aria's grandfather who died several years ago. He practiced magic and was the one who trapped Lyria in a stone.

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So far there's two romances and one hidden.
There's 6 endings planned.

I'm currently looking for an interested composer and (tentatively) a colorist.
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Looking for thoughts, comments, etc. Thanks for looking~ :P

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PostPosted: Mon Nov 07, 2011 12:22 pm 
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I'm not really a fan of yuri, but I like the arts, background, and for now, the protagonist. She seems to be 'my type'. You seem to be very creative of their names as well, I truly like their names. I hope this project will go well, I would be interested to play it in the future.

Also, maybe you should write (GXG) in the title? It might attract more fans for your game. Just a friendly suggestion.

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PostPosted: Mon Nov 07, 2011 12:24 pm 
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This looks very promising! I’m actually not a person who enjoys playing same gender relationships either, but I’m still really excited for this game. Your art is simply gorgeous! The characters have such interesting personalities and you've really captured that in their designs. And claps for this being your first VN! Any chance you'll put up a short summary of the story? Or will we discover that on our own when playing it?

Also, since you said you're primarily a comic artist, I'd really love to read your comics now! You wouldn't happen to have your art posted anywhere online, would you? Please share if you do! :D

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PostPosted: Mon Nov 07, 2011 1:27 pm 
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Also, maybe you should write (GXG) in the title? It might attract more fans for your game. Just a friendly suggestion.

Oddly enough, that does the exact OPPOSITE for me, making me think the focus is going to be, "LESBIANS R SO HAWT, U GAIZ!!11!" I have similar feelings toward anything labelled 'BxB'. 8|

*Ahem* On topic, I have to say, your art is really nice and I love the amount of detail.

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PostPosted: Mon Nov 07, 2011 1:52 pm 
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Your art is lovely <3
good luck with it, I'll be looking forward to this ^__^

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PostPosted: Mon Nov 07, 2011 2:38 pm 
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HanaMori wrote:
I'm not really a fan of yuri, but I like the arts, background, and for now, the protagonist. She seems to be 'my type'. You seem to be very creative of their names as well, I truly like their names. I hope this project will go well, I would be interested to play it in the future.

Also, maybe you should write (GXG) in the title? It might attract more fans for your game. Just a friendly suggestion.

Thank you! It makes me glad to hear you like the names! :P And i'm also glad you're interested in playing it!

That's a good idea

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This looks very promising! I’m actually not a person who enjoys playing same gender relationships either, but I’m still really excited for this game. Your art is simply gorgeous! The characters have such interesting personalities and you've really captured that in their designs. And claps for this being your first VN! Any chance you'll put up a short summary of the story? Or will we discover that on our own when playing it?

Also, since you said you're primarily a comic artist, I'd really love to read your comics now! You wouldn't happen to have your art posted anywhere online, would you? Please share if you do! :D

Thank you very much for the super nice comments! I'm glad you have an interest despite not usually being into same-sex stories. And haha i spent about 15 minutes trying to make a decent summary and gave up. ._. I'll definitely get one together in the future though.

I have two comics and they're being released in 2012 :mrgreen:

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Oddly enough, that does the exact OPPOSITE for me, making me think the focus is going to be, "LESBIANS R SO HAWT, U GAIZ!!11!" I have similar feelings toward anything labelled 'BxB'. 8|

*Ahem* On topic, I have to say, your art is really nice and I love the amount of detail.

Kind of curious if you think the same when they say gxb/bxg

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Your art is lovely <3
good luck with it, I'll be looking forward to this ^__^


Awesome, thank you. Hope you'll enjoy it when i get a demo out :P

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Mink wrote:
Oddly enough, that does the exact OPPOSITE for me, making me think the focus is going to be, "LESBIANS R SO HAWT, U GAIZ!!11!" I have similar feelings toward anything labelled 'BxB'. 8|

*Ahem* On topic, I have to say, your art is really nice and I love the amount of detail.

Kind of curious if you think the same when they say gxb/bxg

It makes me think the 'plot' will take a backseat to the "get the boy/girl" aspect. To me saying that it has romanceable characters and just showing that they're girls/boys is better than slapping on the label GxG/BxB/BxG/GxB/Yaoi/Yuri/etc. But I digress and your mileage may vary on that.

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No problem~ I admire anyone who puts that much time into their artwork.

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PostPosted: Mon Nov 07, 2011 3:32 pm 
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I like what I see! :D Yay more yuri games! I love the background and character design.

I wish you good luck! Try to have fun with it! *stalks*

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PostPosted: Mon Nov 07, 2011 4:40 pm 
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Omg yes. Your art is incredible, not only the sprites but the backgrounds are GORGEOUS. It sounds really fun in terms of plot and characters, Lyria is… *g* EXCELLENT. One of my favorite types. Plus, the heroine is headstrong, I like that <3 It's hard to come across a likeable FMC… There isn't much about her yet, but it looks promising. I'm definitely anxious for it!


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The art is AMAZING. I love it. I love yuri.

...I think I love you.

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PostPosted: Mon Nov 07, 2011 5:00 pm 
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Yuri. <3
Finally one of these games. :>
[GirlxGirl is so cute. x3]

And the art is gorgeous!

Also... LYRIA!! ♥___♥
/falls in love.

Can't wait for an update. <3

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HOLYCRAP ASDFGHJKL;!!!
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*Ahem* Sorry, I had an um...cough. XD

Wow. Just wow. You're art...is like...a delicious ice cream cone I've been wanting for like 3 months now, but better.
Personally I like Yuri, if done tastefully. And to be honest I think your project is all tasteful so it's totally stalker material for me! -Gets ready to stalk your project-

Keep up the fabulous work on your extremely promising project! ^^

(And yes, I'm totally fangirling over Lyria, if you were wondering. X'D)

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Wow, this looks to be an interesting project, and your art is gorgeous~ The backgrounds in particular are quite stunning. I'll be looking forward to this project. :D


P.S. I'd be happy to volunteer as a colourist if you need one :D

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PostPosted: Mon Nov 07, 2011 10:16 pm 
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Aaahh I love it already @A@ Lyria is so sexy~ I'm interested in being a colorist! I'm very versatile :)


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HanaMori wrote:
Also, maybe you should write (GXG) in the title? It might attract more fans for your game. Just a friendly suggestion.

Oddly enough, that does the exact OPPOSITE for me, making me think the focus is going to be, "LESBIANS R SO HAWT, U GAIZ!!11!" I have similar feelings toward anything labelled 'BxB'. 8|

*Ahem* On topic, I have to say, your art is really nice and I love the amount of detail.


That seems like an odd reaction ^_^' It's like assuming all Sci-fi stories will have spaceships. They are just labels for caterorgisation, nothing more. It's better than surprising people when it happens to come up. I would hope that most people would at least read the synopsis before judging a game, since it is a bit closed minded to do otherwise (judging a book by it's cover). People will still do it of course, but it's definitely not the best way to sort which games you will and will not play.

@Razz
Gorgeous art by the way, love the backgrounds :)
I wish you luck!

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