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Re: Witch Spell
This was so cute >.< Everything was really nice, though some phrases were kinda awkward xD I really loved it! Though the emotes were annoying >3>
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Wah, the story's so fluffy and nice! >.<
I enjoy it very much and I wonder if there are actually boys as nice as Jin and Hisato xD
I kinda got stuck with the typos and stuffs but manage to prevail
I enjoy it very much and I wonder if there are actually boys as nice as Jin and Hisato xD
I kinda got stuck with the typos and stuffs but manage to prevail
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I must say that I really liked the artwork. The anime-style exaggerations were funny and are worthy of my appreciation. The story wasn't bad because it did make me smile. The only thing I didn't like was the grammar. It did not let me sleep in peace.
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This game is super adorable! Your artwork is lovely (I really liked the colours you used along with that check pattern, those uniforms are sweet ) and I really liked the music you picked, too. I think everyone else has already covered the little nitpicks I had, but still, great game overall. Good job~!
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Congratulations for your first game, it was shineh, sparkly and fun. :3 Good luck on your future games!
EDIT : One thing though, Akari just said "I don't like boys!" to Jin and then suddenly she confessed to him. I went WTF O-O And I'm sure Jin would, too XD
EDIT : One thing though, Akari just said "I don't like boys!" to Jin and then suddenly she confessed to him. I went WTF O-O And I'm sure Jin would, too XD
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Hi! I want to thank you for your nice reply!mapletaffy wrote:Waah~ Thanks everyone for the positive feedback~ I didn't expect those. (T.T) *tears of joy.
@cosmo: Oh~ I'm sorry~~~ I will learn how to convert it to linux~
I must say that releasing a game for Mac or Linux is as easy as for Windows: The only thing you have to do is to tick off "Linux" and "Mac" after "Build Distributions" in the Ren'Py-launcher! It's that easy! It's great! And I always want to thank PyTom for doing this like he did here! )
… Maybe uploading your stuff may actually be harder than making a Linux or Mac release. But: better do it yourself and try it out. It normally should not take more than 3 minutes maybe
I have to say that it is sometime even possible to use a Ren'Py game in the Ren'Py folder of the own Ren'Py installation even if it was made for a different platform – and start it with the launcher. But if you would like your game to be played by someone also after one year or more has passed … It will be better or even necessary to have a real build for other platforms. – And of course it is easier for the gamers! There are now some games available for download here through the forum that can't be played anymore on some platforms because the authors didn't take the additional 3 minutes… To make them playable again would today be really some work!!
The easiest may be to add a "all platforms" release.
It is of course your own decision Because it's your game!! – But seeing the many replies here, maybe it is worth to do it as it may enhance the popularity of your game!
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This one looks very interesting XD Downloading right now
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xD i was wondering about the same thing lol xDazureXtwilight wrote:Congratulations for your first game, it was shineh, sparkly and fun. :3 Good luck on your future games!
EDIT : One thing though, Akari just said "I don't like boys!" to Jin and then suddenly she confessed to him. I went WTF O-O And I'm sure Jin would, too XD
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I thought this was a cute little game. ^_^ The interface was great, the uniforms were sweet; I especially loved the chibi exaggerations. I will admit first I was bothered by how smitten Akari was, but I warmed up to her seeing her more introspective side. Great job on your first game. You have earned yourself a fan!
Can't wait to see more from you.
Can't wait to see more from you.
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I downloaded and played this game , yesterday. I loved this game . Keep up a good work
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Re: Witch Spell (with Cross-Platform Version)
Waah~~ Thank you guys for appreciating Witch Spell~~~ And sorry for late upload of the Cross Platform Version because last week is our midterms exam week (T.T)
@tuna_sushi: Waaah~ I didn't noticed that before~~ XD~ Thank you for letting me know~
@Arkon: Thank you for making an ending guide~~~(^_^). .And thank you for appreciating this visual novel~~
@pleasethinkofme: Yes~~ I don't speak english even in person~XD Yes~~ Next time I'll find a proofreader~~ (^__^)
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@tuna_sushi: Waaah~ I didn't noticed that before~~ XD~ Thank you for letting me know~
@Arkon: Thank you for making an ending guide~~~(^_^). .And thank you for appreciating this visual novel~~
@pleasethinkofme: Yes~~ I don't speak english even in person~XD Yes~~ Next time I'll find a proofreader~~ (^__^)
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Hahaha~ Yes~~ Once Akari tell Jin that she hates boys, That's an automatic Hisato Ending~~
@cosmo - wow~ Thank you for the guide on how to convert it to different platforms~~ I'm so afraid before to convert it because it might not work~~ but now I think it is okay~Re: Witch Spell (with Cross-Platform Version)
Congrats on your game! I played this the day after Halloween. It's really cute.
Akari makes me laugh.
I enjoyed it. It was fluffy and funny.
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Thank you for putting it up on the cross-platform! It was very cute, I enjoyed playing through it. It picked me up after a bad day. Please continue making games, I'm looking forward to another one.
Re: Witch Spell (with Cross-Platform Version)
I played it now that you made the cross platform Yay!
The first thing that I thought when I was playing was "it's a very nice layout" with the textbox, menu, and so on.
The character artwork was fine and I thought Akari's expressions were funny! The backgrounds looked a bit weird to me but I don't think that's a bad thing in a free and short VN.
My only real problem was the sometimes bad English and smiley faces, but a proofreader would fix that so it's allright. English is difficult
I agree with everyone else that it was a great first game and I hope to see more in the future
The first thing that I thought when I was playing was "it's a very nice layout" with the textbox, menu, and so on.
The character artwork was fine and I thought Akari's expressions were funny! The backgrounds looked a bit weird to me but I don't think that's a bad thing in a free and short VN.
My only real problem was the sometimes bad English and smiley faces, but a proofreader would fix that so it's allright. English is difficult
I agree with everyone else that it was a great first game and I hope to see more in the future
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an amusing story. 5 min. of reading well spent. I rather liked the comic cgs.
two things I would suggest that I don't think have been mentioned, I like the character design and the art is good, but try to make sure the positions of the pupils match when drawing the eyes. Your characters are cross-eyed a lot. Also, please don't make the buttons in your menus transparent. It makes them hard to read. Especially the bars in preferences. I had to guess on the position of the auto-speed bar...
still, good overall.
two things I would suggest that I don't think have been mentioned, I like the character design and the art is good, but try to make sure the positions of the pupils match when drawing the eyes. Your characters are cross-eyed a lot. Also, please don't make the buttons in your menus transparent. It makes them hard to read. Especially the bars in preferences. I had to guess on the position of the auto-speed bar...
still, good overall.
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