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PostPosted: Mon Dec 05, 2011 2:46 am 
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I played it and I enjoyed it. The CGs were hilarious, I liked sake-bento's voice acting, the gui was pretty sweet and the music fit very well. And please don't feel discouraged Mugen, you'll get it.

The third ending made me chuckle. A lot.

Anyway, cheers!


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PostPosted: Mon Dec 05, 2011 3:21 am 
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My new favorite way to say "Good Morning" is officially:

OHIO GO SAY MUST

Ah, those poor Japanese people thought my American accent was bad before . . . wait till they get a load of me now!

I also loved Anonymous Loser's censor bar escapades. Reminds me of the book "How NOT to Draw Manga" where they also treat censor bars as physical objects to hilarious results.

And I found it more and more hilarious the longer Anonymous Loser went without knowing their names. I was all - this guy IS a complete loser, he's been running with this girl for two weeks and still refers to her as Sporty Girl in his head. So when this was acknowledged at the end, I laughed even harder. Though now it occurs to me that those ungrateful girls didn't ask Anonymous Loser his name either! :lol:


EDIT: Oh, and the movie played fine for me, but wouldn't it be easier to just make the logo using ATL or something, especially since the movie is like 15% of total file size for a couple seconds of running time?


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PostPosted: Mon Dec 05, 2011 3:35 am 
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Great work as usual, Uncle Mugen :D Really love the final project, though I have yet to get all the endings... Also we're in the same boat with screens, though I'm code deficient in general...

I'll be honest that the only thing I didn't like was the new voice acting... Was a little forced-sounding in my opinion, I thought the voices in the beta were a bit more natural... Or maybe I just like the sound of a grown man doing a teenage girl's voice?


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PostPosted: Mon Dec 05, 2011 10:46 am 
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KimiYoriBaka wrote:
I found that if the video doesn't play, you can just go into the \game\anim folder and remove the movie file (after watching it I would assume). the game runs fine without it.

I did this to make it work..

I sure didn't pay a lot of attention on the 'loser' (I feel a bit guilty calling him that), and more focus about getting both of the twins. I'm sure the MC would actually look attractive on actual shoujo style lol.
All the musics fits, the CGs were good, the game was simple, I wished the story was longer! Great job!
I hope you make more of this one day! xD

Edit: I think there was a typo: "When the shelf fail one by one". Perhaps you meant 'fall'?
And you missed 'n' in my email, 'hanaofspring'. But it's fine with me.

Also, got the last ending.
lol, I thought he would kill himself.

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PostPosted: Mon Dec 05, 2011 1:50 pm 
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well~~ i love this!
end of story~ syalalala~

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PostPosted: Mon Dec 05, 2011 4:15 pm 
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PostPosted: Mon Dec 05, 2011 5:09 pm 
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Really enjoyed seeing this all put together! The cgs are hilarious and the cut-ins are a great touch. Overall, cute game! It's a sweet story and I’m still working on getting all the endings. Loved the Extras gallery too. Everyone did an awesome job and I'm happy to have contributed as well.

Found a few typos, (“Of course it is. It’s the only cookie I’d ever tasted that was made for me by a beutiful girl.” and more in the commentary.) but that’s it! The game ran fine for me, including the videos.

And you're already super savvy with coding, Mugen! Cheer up! :D

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PostPosted: Mon Dec 05, 2011 8:06 pm 
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I was wondering if someone was going to give the DSE a cosmetic redo. ^_^ Very well done, it actually makes more scripting sense with a visual. Thanks~!

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PostPosted: Thu Dec 08, 2011 10:36 am 
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OK I am about to release a MUCH more BETTER version with MUCH more graphics MORE improved graphics, no video so everyone can open it without difficulties and best of all... an open spoiler version for everyone who wanted to take a peek at the inner workings... Oh and for everyone who participated in the Fan-Art Beg-a-Thon... I think I missed a few things so in case you wanted to add some details and corrections to the credits please tell me...

"POOF" (Disappears)

Oh and...

Originally I was planning to make an option where you could genderswap everyone and have a female protagonist interacting with the now male twins... complete with voice acting... this might be the perfect time to re-implement it...

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PostPosted: Thu Dec 08, 2011 3:54 pm 
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Yaaay :D

Oh my! I'll draw them again if you implement it, hehehee... Will the boy versions have yellow headbands too? :P If you need any coloring assistance, hit me up.


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PostPosted: Thu Dec 08, 2011 4:43 pm 
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My old cheap video card doesn't let me enjoy the widescreen BGs, but all the effects you made are look great (panning (especially over girls legs, he-he), jogging, photofinish).
You may concider me a dumb, but I have no idea how can I unlock the last image in "Event CG's". Well, I got 3 endings (one for each girl and one with both), but everytime I try to see it - it's only the sound of someones farting...(hope this "someone" didn't overdo while recording sfx). Any clues or something...))

Uh, and I must say, that the loser guy is much more lucky than the man from "Tales From the Crypt: Split Personality"...))
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Originally I was planning to make an option where you could genderswap everyone and have a female protagonist interacting with the now male twins... complete with voice acting... this might be the perfect time to re-implement it...

Hm, why not to make both (MCs and twins) gender optional... :mrgreen:


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PostPosted: Thu Dec 08, 2011 7:08 pm 
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@Alex

Did you get the "bad" end? That's probably what you're missing.

@Mugen and Co.

(Since I'm already posting) Nice job on the game by the way. :D


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PostPosted: Thu Dec 08, 2011 9:29 pm 
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Alex wrote:
You may concider me a dumb, but I have no idea how can I unlock the last image in "Event CG's".


Yup, I think you missed the bad ending. You're suppose to skip school, hang out and play games everyday until one time the MC will get bored.

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PostPosted: Fri Dec 09, 2011 4:46 am 
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Do install the gender switch version if you can * D *

Ah and I'll pm you.


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PostPosted: Fri Dec 09, 2011 11:47 am 
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Thanks, CombatEye and HanaMori!
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Yup, I think you missed the bad ending. You're suppose to skip school, hang out and play games everyday until one time the MC will get bored.

I was thought of it, but got bored of it first, so I quit...)) Now I got the bad ending - it's cool!
(should think some of my real life...)


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