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Kuh-Couch
 Post subject: Re: The Phantom Caller
PostPosted: Fri Dec 09, 2011 7:49 am 
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When there are only two endings ........ who IS the phantom caller now ?! =/
And how did the handgun get under the bed?

Story got me hooked, even though I don't like Scarlett.
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Taleweaver
 Post subject: Re: The Phantom Caller
PostPosted: Fri Dec 09, 2011 7:56 am 
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Location: Germany
Completed: Metropolitan Blues, The Loyal Kinsman, Daemonophilia, The Dreaming, The Thirteenth Year, Adrift, Bionic Heart 2
Projects: The Pilgrim's Path, Elspeth's Garden, Secret Adventure Game!
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Kuh-Couch wrote:
When there are only two endings ........ who IS the phantom caller now ?! =/


Uh oh. This reminds me of...

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So ur with ur honey and yur making out wen the phone rigns.
U anser it n the vioce is "wut r u doing wit my daughter?"
U tell ur girl n she say "my dad is ded".
THEN WHO WAS PHONE?

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Scriptwriter and director of The Dreaming

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Scriptwriter and director of The Thirteenth Year

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Scriptwriter and producer of Adrift

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manga_otaku
 Post subject: Re: The Phantom Caller
PostPosted: Fri Dec 09, 2011 1:00 pm 
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Wright1000 wrote:
Good point.
But I think you certainly saw Scarlett smoking at the office. It was her father's office. If the daughter of the boss smokes in the office, whose example will the other workers follow? I think that shows that she is a spoiled brat.
Besides, I never said that Scarlett is a brat. Andren did.

Even though this does show a bad example, many people smoke these days whether they're the employer or employee.
Mink wrote:
Scarlett doesn't seem like a bad person; ANDREN does. He comes off like a judgmental jerk more than anything else, so why should I believe at all about Scarlett's behavior? There is such a thing as an 'unreliable narrator'.

I think I agree with Mink here, since Andren tends to just judge people. For example, he judged Scarlett and also Mark (even though he was plotting something bad). We as the player didn't get much background information about Scarlett so we can't judge her either.
By the way, was there really a need for Hannah to be included at the beginning of the story? I mean, she didn't appear again...

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jaypee_1
 Post subject: Re: The Phantom Caller
PostPosted: Fri Dec 09, 2011 8:58 pm 
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downloading... lets see if I can endure such violence and horror in this game ^_^ .
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Wright1000
 Post subject: Re: The Phantom Caller
PostPosted: Sat Dec 10, 2011 1:38 am 
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Completed: Finding A Murderer, Memory Loss, Crime Investigation, Stay away from the graveyard, Last Day at School, Lonesome, Email, Hired Gun, Dusk, Hired Gun 2, Man-at-arms, Hired Gun 3, The Phantom Caller, Street Girl, Free love, The Story of Isabel Claudia
Kuh-Couch wrote:
When there are only two endings ........ who IS the phantom caller now ?! =/
And how did the handgun get under the bed?

Story got me hooked, even though I don't like Scarlett.


I won't say right now who the Phantom Caller is.
There are some things that I don't like to reveal in a story.
But if you play the game again, or pay more attention you will get the answers yourself.
And, Hannah was mentioned for a reason.
If you still can't get the meaning of the story, I may send you an explanation through pm.

Taleweaver wrote:
Kuh-Couch wrote:
When there are only two endings ........ who IS the phantom caller now ?! =/


Uh oh. This reminds me of...

Quote:
So ur with ur honey and yur making out wen the phone rigns.
U anser it n the vioce is "wut r u doing wit my daughter?"
U tell ur girl n she say "my dad is ded".
THEN WHO WAS PHONE?


It's obviously her mother.
But I will ask this:
Has the grammar of the above text gone on a vacation?

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Taleweaver
 Post subject: Re: The Phantom Caller
PostPosted: Sat Dec 10, 2011 5:23 am 
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Organization: Tall Tales Productions
Wright1000 wrote:
It's obviously her mother.
But I will ask this:
Has the grammar of the above text gone on a vacation?

Yup. This is what happens on internet memes.

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Scriptwriter and producer of Metropolitan Blues
Creator of The Loyal Kinsman

Scriptwriter and director of Daemonophilia
Scriptwriter and director of The Dreaming

Scriptwriter of Zenith Chronicles
Scriptwriter and director of The Thirteenth Year

Writer for Pet Project II: Heavy Petting
Scriptwriter and producer of Adrift

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"Adrift - Like Ever17, but without the Deus Ex Machina" - HigurashiKira
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Desu_Cake
 Post subject: Re: The Phantom Caller
PostPosted: Mon Dec 12, 2011 2:29 pm 
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Wright1000 wrote:
All I wanted to say was that saying something like "the information was dumped" was a bit harsh.
I don't mind if people tell me about my game. But I don't want to hear just harsh words after I worked so hard on a VN. Everything can be said in a nicer way.
So, feel free to leave feedback, but no abuse.

Ah, I truly apologize! The term infodump is used a lot on several forums I'm on, so I sort of figured everyone knew what it meant. (To be honest, I really wasn't thinkingf when I used the term)
What infodump generally means is that "a lot of information is given while very few events are happening", or at least that's what I meant when I used it. It wasn' intended to be derogatary, or abuse.
I'm so very sorry >_<
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Wright1000
 Post subject: Re: The Phantom Caller
PostPosted: Tue Dec 13, 2011 12:53 am 
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Completed: Finding A Murderer, Memory Loss, Crime Investigation, Stay away from the graveyard, Last Day at School, Lonesome, Email, Hired Gun, Dusk, Hired Gun 2, Man-at-arms, Hired Gun 3, The Phantom Caller, Street Girl, Free love, The Story of Isabel Claudia
Never mind. No need to apologize.
But in future, do choose your words carefully.

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