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Independent Project #01 (2011-present)

Game Title: The Unlucky Fellow
Alternate Title: Lucky
Genre(s): Horror, Romance, Friendship
Artist & Author: MJD
Inspiration: Lucky by MRAZ

Engine: Ren'Py

GAMEPLAY:

Depending on how you proceed into the story (the choices you make even the very little ones) and which girl you try to capture will result into 3 different ends for each character to be accurate. Originally the main characters had been given 6-7 endings, however, since I’m a beginner I decided to lessen the work load at least for a bit. Lazy—I know that...

Total of 15 endings; 4 good, 4 neutral, 4 bad & 3 secret ends, however, may result into just 14 if Livia’s Bad Ending isn’t approved, it shall be omitted. The game can be goal to conquest one of the two girls. Befriend the two guys or even try to match make them with one another.

Total number of Endings: 8 (originally intended)
Total number of Endings: 15++

Note: This originally was play that I wrote for a midterm/final project in school, since I couldn't really participate due feeling ill I made the script by accident. Somehow it ended up being used and the play went on nicely but most parts didn't go as I thought so I decided to think of recreating the story once again with the use of Ren'Py. This is going to be hard, since I'm still a beginner and my art isn't that great.

SUMMARIAZED:

The story takes place in a University in someplace similar to England (somewhat); the main character Harkin came to this institute as a transferee from America. When starting to relax he meets a very unusual pretty girl named Livia though first impressions brought him to dislike the girl. Who wouldn't went she practically jabbed a mechanical pen into his face. At least it didn't leave a scar. Next up would be her overly protective best friend/boyfriend Connor who just doesn't seem to like him very much. The only thing he questions, will he be able to survive his school life here for an entire year; except he may not even last for two weeks.

PROGRESS:

Plot [ 100% ]
Script [ 38.3% ]
Sprites:

Drafting [ 0.0% ]
Inked [ 0.0% ]
Colored [ 0.0% ]
BG [ 0.0% ]

Main Characters:

HARKIN ARDSLEY

Passive || Eighteen || Male

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SILVIA "LIVIA" ROOKE

Aggressive || Seventeen || Female

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CONNOR VACHER

Kind || Eighteen || Male

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JOSEPH "JOEY" BOWIE

Friendly || Sixteen || Male

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RACHEL EVERETTE

Shy || Eighteen || Female

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I hope you enjoy making your visual novel, and that people like it.

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All of my VNs are at http://wolflore.net Some recent works on lemmasoft:
Vera Blanc and the Purloined patient http://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewtopic.php?f=11&t=20801
Something Strange (modern fantasy/romance) http://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewtopic.php?f=11&t=17127
Arnie and the Hitchhiker (vampire romance) http://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewtopic.php?f=11&t=15382
Poorly done hand drawn art is still poorly done art. Be a Poser (or better yet, use DAZ Studio 3D) - dare to be different.

Good luck to you!

Thanks fleet and tigersmurf, but for some reason I feel that no one would be interested in my Visual Novel....

I say don't worry about it, there a lot of people who prefer commenting on complete works.

That being said, you could generate a lot more interest with pictures, more descriptions, or even a logo. Generally, the more information you present, the more people will be interested. I'm sure you'll get more people commenting as you add more to this

Wish you the best of luck~ ^^

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Oh it's Tag-. Hello.

Thanks, I plan to. I'll be showing some of my works by Sunday this week soon. (Have exams to do)

Posting character sketches and screen shots will usually generate more comments. Don't get discouraged, at least you didn't get a lot of negative comments.

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All of my VNs are at http://wolflore.net Some recent works on lemmasoft:
Vera Blanc and the Purloined patient http://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewtopic.php?f=11&t=20801
Something Strange (modern fantasy/romance) http://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewtopic.php?f=11&t=17127
Arnie and the Hitchhiker (vampire romance) http://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewtopic.php?f=11&t=15382
Poorly done hand drawn art is still poorly done art. Be a Poser (or better yet, use DAZ Studio 3D) - dare to be different.

Managed to put some of my work samples early ^^

Though, I need to put more emotion into Harkin. He's a bit too stoic-looking

ooh pretty art
I've been checking your thread in secret and now that you have pictures I have something to base my opinions on.
I like it keep up the good work

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Deviantart <3
Tumblr <3

Thank you Weakjounin ^^

Oooh, there we go, pretty pictures xD

I'm happy you put up concept sketches and such as well. I'm really liking how Harkin turned out, and he's very tall xD I'm quite curious as to what led Livia to practically stab a mechanical pencil at him during their first meeting, but I'll wait for that of course

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Thanks Tag-

Are those what the sketches I made called? (never knew)

Hmm... still haven't even got to that part of the script ^^"
Oh no I noticed Connor looks way too side character-ish now! I need to work on their profiles faster!

I love your sketches! And your coloring as well. Don't say you're not that good of an artist, your drawings are beautiful.

Harkin reminds me of a friend I had in high school. He had horrible luck and also was blonde

Ooo your character sketches are pretty wicked ^^ But I have no artistic skills at all so don't take it the wrong way ^^"
I'm liking the idea of this game - I look forward to the updates! And the full game of course

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Projects:
WIP|[KN] Day Of Reckoning|
Completed|[KN] Saving Project Blind: Part One|[KN] Saving Project Blind: Part Two|[KN] Saving Project Blind: Final Part|
Is available to help with proof-reading (Grammar freak...) Maybe voice-acting in the near future x]

Thanks, but really compared to some people I know. I'm not that good.

Oh? That's interesting, but though this guy will have much suffering ahead of him ^^"



Haha you're the first to say they're wicked
I'll be updating very soon ^^