Welcome to the forum, Bobbyberta.
It's usually a good idea to describe your story, characters, setting, and so on. While many people want to avoid spoilers, you will benefit by providing some details and explanations.
From what I found on your Deviant Art page, you've created a short story with Flash. And it has two endings. There were a few spelling mistakes, but what concerned me was...
that it was very difficult to tell what was happening in your story. It all seemed very dream-like. Who are these characters? What are their goals? What's going on?
Yes, this is a short story, and a first try. But like they say in Inception, we need to go deeper. In future stories, you will benefit from providing concrete details about who's involved, what they're doing, and why the audience should pay attention.
Sorry if this sounded a bit harsh. Honestly, this is not a bad start. Keep writing, keep using Flash and Renpy to make games and stories.