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Had any takers yet? After a quick look, I'm interested, but it looks like the basic spelling and grammar so far is very well done. I'm only as far as Marianne visiting Dion in the hospital as of this posting, which doesn't look like chapter four yet. I'm guessing the first three chapters have already been well edited? Are chapters distinct in game, or is it more arbitrary line that I should look for with chapter four?
Any preferences for how I give feedback? PM or a post here, formatted how... I'm new to the site, so I don't know the standards here, but I'd like to help.
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