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 Post subject: [KN] Christmas v1.2
PostPosted: Thu Jan 27, 2011 2:08 am 
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Christmas
"I hate it."
"No... you don't."

Notice: Due to some uncertain reasons... Norton Antivirus displays that the game file is infected by a virus. But it is not. It is the only anti-virus that shows that ruddy message...
Avast, Avira and McAfee does not show this message...

It has been solved. Just update from Live Update...

Synopsis:
A short visual novel about a girl Jennifer, who hates Christmas because on the very day of Christmas, her brother took his final breaths in this world.

Game-play:
Features two modes:
--> Unedited Version - This side of the story contains explicit use of swearing and f word.
--> Edited Version - This side of the story tones down the swearing side and contains no use of f word.

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(Mind me if you didn't understand the summary... I'm kind of really bad when it comes to summarising things up...)

Download Links v1.1:
Windows: http://www.mediafire.com/?78y5nu344ru77sj
Mac: http://www.mediafire.com/?svwyn9d4g1ygp29

Download Link v1.2:
Linux: http://www.mediafire.com/?3w2rvd2be4dz631

Let me know what you think...

EDIT: Have added v1.2 for Linux users... it fixes all known problems...


Attachments:
File comment: option.rpy file for Linux users if you have v1.1 or below...
options.rpy [8.6 KiB]
Downloaded 171 times
File comment: script.rpy file for Linux users if you have v1.1 or below...
script.rpy [60.79 KiB]
Downloaded 178 times

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"A writer who waits for ideal conditions under which to work will die without putting a word on paper." -- E.B. WHITE
"I love writing but hate starting. The page is awfully white and it says, "You may have fooled some of the people some of the time but those days are over, giftless. I'm not your agent and I'm not your mommy. I'm a white piece of paper, you wanna dance with me?" And I really, really don't." -- Aaron Sorkin

My Completed Games: Christmas


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 Post subject: Re: [KN] Christmas v1.1
PostPosted: Thu Jan 27, 2011 1:07 pm 
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That looks great DHP! Downloading.


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 Post subject: Re: [KN] Christmas v1.1
PostPosted: Thu Jan 27, 2011 3:04 pm 
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It was very nice of you to provide two versions of this. I always use unedited, but an edited version is great for younger players or people who worry about kids getting into their games. Or just don't like lots of swearing.

Downloading, will try to get some feedback up sometime today/tomorrow.

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 Post subject: Re: [KN] Christmas v1.1
PostPosted: Fri Jan 28, 2011 12:57 am 
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Thanks... ^.^

Looking forward to some feedback...

Notice: Due to some uncertain reasons... Norton Antivirus displays that the game file is infected by a virus. But it is not. It is the only anti-virus that shows that ruddy message...
Avast, Avira and McAfee does not show this message...

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“One must be careful with words. Words turn probabilities into facts and by sheer force of definition translate tendencies into habits.” ― Fay Weldon
"A writer who waits for ideal conditions under which to work will die without putting a word on paper." -- E.B. WHITE
"I love writing but hate starting. The page is awfully white and it says, "You may have fooled some of the people some of the time but those days are over, giftless. I'm not your agent and I'm not your mommy. I'm a white piece of paper, you wanna dance with me?" And I really, really don't." -- Aaron Sorkin

My Completed Games: Christmas


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 Post subject: Re: [KN] Christmas v1.1
PostPosted: Sat Jan 29, 2011 3:13 am 
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It was great actually. Jennifer was evil at first though got better. Who wouldn't like Christmas???


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 Post subject: Re: [KN] Christmas v1.1
PostPosted: Sun Jan 30, 2011 1:02 am 
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Thanks for the feedback Qookies... ^.^
Much appreciated...

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“One must be careful with words. Words turn probabilities into facts and by sheer force of definition translate tendencies into habits.” ― Fay Weldon
"A writer who waits for ideal conditions under which to work will die without putting a word on paper." -- E.B. WHITE
"I love writing but hate starting. The page is awfully white and it says, "You may have fooled some of the people some of the time but those days are over, giftless. I'm not your agent and I'm not your mommy. I'm a white piece of paper, you wanna dance with me?" And I really, really don't." -- Aaron Sorkin

My Completed Games: Christmas


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 Post subject: Re: [KN] Christmas v1.1
PostPosted: Fri Apr 01, 2011 8:06 pm 
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Sigh... I'm sorry to point to you that Linux is cASe SenSiTIvE:

Code:
  File "/home/pigi/dload/Christmas-linux-x86/renpy/loader.py", line 319, in load
    raise IOError("Couldn't find file '%s'." % name)
IOError: Couldn't find file 'Miscellaneous/textbox.png'.

While running game code:
 - script at line 426 of C:\Documents and Settings\@dmin\My Documents\Christmas-win32/game/script.rpy

pigi@Lauria:~/dload/Christmas-linux-x86$ ls game/Miscellaneous/
CG-1.png  snow.png     Splash2.png  Splash4.png  Thumbs.db     Version2.png
CG-2.png  Splash1.png  Splash3.png  Textbox.png  Version1.png  Warning.png


you see where is your mistake ?

Sorry for the harsh tone, but I'm fed up enough of constantly having this show-stoppers, whose can be avoided with a little care....

Best regards from Italy,
dott. Piergiorgio.


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 Post subject: Re: [KN] Christmas v1.2
PostPosted: Sat Apr 09, 2011 9:34 am 
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It has been fixed...
http://www.mediafire.com/?3w2rvd2be4dz631

And sorry for the troubles...

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“One must be careful with words. Words turn probabilities into facts and by sheer force of definition translate tendencies into habits.” ― Fay Weldon
"A writer who waits for ideal conditions under which to work will die without putting a word on paper." -- E.B. WHITE
"I love writing but hate starting. The page is awfully white and it says, "You may have fooled some of the people some of the time but those days are over, giftless. I'm not your agent and I'm not your mommy. I'm a white piece of paper, you wanna dance with me?" And I really, really don't." -- Aaron Sorkin

My Completed Games: Christmas


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 Post subject: Re: [KN] Christmas v1.2
PostPosted: Sat Apr 09, 2011 10:29 am 
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Thanks, Dragoon ! :)


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 Post subject: Re: [KN] Christmas v1.2
PostPosted: Sun Apr 10, 2011 1:10 am 
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I should be the one saying Thank You...
Will be waiting for your reply...

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"You can't wait for inspiration. You have to go after it with a club." --Jack London
“One must be careful with words. Words turn probabilities into facts and by sheer force of definition translate tendencies into habits.” ― Fay Weldon
"A writer who waits for ideal conditions under which to work will die without putting a word on paper." -- E.B. WHITE
"I love writing but hate starting. The page is awfully white and it says, "You may have fooled some of the people some of the time but those days are over, giftless. I'm not your agent and I'm not your mommy. I'm a white piece of paper, you wanna dance with me?" And I really, really don't." -- Aaron Sorkin

My Completed Games: Christmas


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 Post subject: Re: [KN] Christmas v1.2
PostPosted: Sun Jan 01, 2012 3:45 pm 
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Christmas reviewed at VNR4. Congratulations on your visual novel, and thank you.


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 Post subject: Re: [KN] Christmas v1.2
PostPosted: Sun Jan 01, 2012 5:13 pm 
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Thanks for playing it....
Checking the review out...

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“One must be careful with words. Words turn probabilities into facts and by sheer force of definition translate tendencies into habits.” ― Fay Weldon
"A writer who waits for ideal conditions under which to work will die without putting a word on paper." -- E.B. WHITE
"I love writing but hate starting. The page is awfully white and it says, "You may have fooled some of the people some of the time but those days are over, giftless. I'm not your agent and I'm not your mommy. I'm a white piece of paper, you wanna dance with me?" And I really, really don't." -- Aaron Sorkin

My Completed Games: Christmas


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 Post subject: Re: [KN] Christmas v1.2
PostPosted: Thu Feb 23, 2012 12:16 pm 
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Time to have a look...

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 Post subject: Re: [KN] Christmas v1.2
PostPosted: Sat Feb 25, 2012 7:18 am 
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;__; That one kinda got me teary-eyed...Or maybe it's just me maximizing my emotions again.
But I suddenly laughed at the part when she found out she was just sleeping on the grave. XD

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 Post subject: Re: [KN] Christmas v1.2
PostPosted: Sat Feb 25, 2012 8:18 am 
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Thank you for playing it... and getting the player teary-eyed was my intention... so yay! for me... :-p

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“One must be careful with words. Words turn probabilities into facts and by sheer force of definition translate tendencies into habits.” ― Fay Weldon
"A writer who waits for ideal conditions under which to work will die without putting a word on paper." -- E.B. WHITE
"I love writing but hate starting. The page is awfully white and it says, "You may have fooled some of the people some of the time but those days are over, giftless. I'm not your agent and I'm not your mommy. I'm a white piece of paper, you wanna dance with me?" And I really, really don't." -- Aaron Sorkin

My Completed Games: Christmas


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