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I really enjoyed it! I knew it would turn awesome, as I know you I mostly liked the part where Mike yelled when he hurt himself, before Miki apply some balm. I mean, that was soooo childish, as the whole character is.

Gerald and his maturity is also a good thing, I really enjoyed this guy. Can't wait to know more about this pair.

Music = It's kinda too smooth for my likes, excepting the music box scene.

But, overall, it's awesome as ever!

The characters are awesome in their interactions. I have a huge crush on Gerald. <3

The music and animations and range of expressions for all the sprites was awe inspiring.

Great Job

Susan

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Thank you for the kind comments! You've encouraged me to make a second episode for NaNoRenO~

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Episode 1 = a success! Such a cute prologue! Can't wait for the next!
This was my first proofreading job, I hope I did a satisfactory job =]

P.S. The music was great too!

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*A Troll's Fairy Tale* viewtopic.php?f=11&t=20160 (Proofreader)

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MY VN: Hearts Captured http://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewtopic.php?f=16&t=14598 [ON HOLD]

Thanks! Wonder if I can ask for your help for the second one too :3

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Gasp! You have a new game out! (does happy dance) So much for getting my h/w done ^.^'...

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Thanks for the comment, do post a review~

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JESUS CHRIST, GOOGLING HOW TO UNRAR STUFF IS EASIER THAN WAITING FOR 1000 DAYS FOR A REPLY. SRSLY.

Yeah, sorry about not giving a review right off the bat... (feels guilty). But here it is: I felt like the game played very well, and is one of the better 'prolouge' games I've seen, specifically because it was a full episode (didn't have a cliff hanger end) but still left some expositional loose ends/teasers. Also I loved the way you switched between two diff. character's POV throughout the chapter. And finally, as always, a huge number of bonus points to you for being one of the few writers whose character's plot twists manage to surprise and delite me.
I'm looking forward to the next episode! ^_^

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I'd be honored! Just call on me anytime! You know how much I love your games!

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-KissOfDeath, Proofreader, aspiring VN writer, and a
Completed:
RE:Set Episode(s) 1 and 2 (Proofreader)
*A Troll's Fairy Tale* viewtopic.php?f=11&t=20160 (Proofreader)

WIPs:
MY VN: Hearts Captured http://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewtopic.php?f=16&t=14598 [ON HOLD]

i really wanna play this but every time i try and download the, winzip thing won let me

Gaah!! Finished this game today! It was really good I liked it a lot~~~ Mike and Gerald are really good characters *__* I want to see more about their story. At first when Miki thought Mike was cute, I thought But I'm so glad I was wrong about that xD;;;; Ahhhhhhahhahah /nervous laughter OTL

The music choices were really good! And I liked how the GUI switched between the pink and blue text box depending on whose side image was active at the time. Really nice idea!! I unlocked all the bonuses and the "satisfying ending" was super awesome. It really put the other ending in context. I definitely wouldn't mind if you made an episode 2 :3

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Try redownloading, and then opening it by winrar. Winrar download link: http://www.win-rar.com/download.html



Thanks for the review! XD I'm glad everyone likes it~
Well, since

I wonder what everyone expects to be in the second episode :3

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really love the music and the opening animation.

can't wait for the next eps!

please add more stories why Gerard can act both kind (usual Gerard) and brutal (when he is stomping Sydonai)

Thanks!

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I really, really liked this! It was both: So sweet and cute, while on the other hand exciting enough to keep me occupied the whole evening

I would love to see another sequel of it and... well, send you a pm

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