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MelonCandy
PostPosted: Mon Apr 02, 2012 12:08 am 
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[MASSIVE UPDATE:Due to a few problems I decided to change the story for this VN. The main heroine will still be a nine-tailed fox with few other mystical beings but not an entire school of them. Sorry for anyone who was really looking forward for this project :(, I'll try to make it up through this one. Well enjoy!]

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Title: A Nine Tale
Genre: Fantasy, supernatural, romance, comedy, GxB.
Rating: PG or maybe 15+?
Platform: PC, VN

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Story:

"When I was little, my mother told me about the world of humans...Many of our kind saw them as our prey and food, but my mother...envied them..."
Nana a orphaned nine tailed fox, always dreamed of being human ever since her mother told her stories about them. There were rumors among the mystical beings were a powerful magician named "Zodiac" was able to make anyone fully human. Although he/she likes to hide his/her identity and is a hard person to find. Nana was determined to find the magician, and was apparently last seen as a student in a local highschool not far from the woods. With a help of friends, she is able to disguise herself as a human temporarily and is on the search for the powerful magician, Zodiac.


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ATTENTION THESE SPRITES MAY CHANGE FOR IMPROVEMENT OVERTIME.

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Fox Heroine-
Name: Nana
Age: 20 fox years = 16 human years. (I made this up)
Likes: Humans
Hates: Bats
"I guess I'm a curious fox...I find anything human-like interesting!

Friendly Friends-

Name:Dal (Fox-guardian)
Age:25 fox years = 17 human years
Likes: Freedom
Hates: Humans
This is my good fox friend Dal! He's the laziest fox I've ever seen. Unlike me he hates the humans for polluting the world.:( He's definitely against me becoming human.

Name:Wander (Fairy)
Age: 30yrs
Likes:Strawberries
Hates:Trolls
Wander, a kind fairy. She's the one who helped me become a human temporarily. Kinda like a fairy godmother I guess?

Humans?
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Name:Hyun-Oh
Age:16
I don't know if this guy is just shy or doesn't like talking to me... He's hardly at school, but he does come he's always alone or avoids socializing. :S

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Name: Yuna
Age: 16
This girl really likes the color pink and asking weird questions...

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Name: Taemin
Age:17
I really don't like this guy. He's rude, arrogant, and a sneaky little bastard. Even humans have people like him I guess...

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Name:Jinae
Age:17
My first human friend! She's a friendly and cute girl, though she has a loud voice.

Name: Ba-dam
Age: 18
A senior one year above me. He's always forgetting things and seems to be quiet clumsy.

Features:
-4 guys obtainable
-1 True Ending
-Around 10 Endings
-CG Gallery?!

[There's more characters I promise! But I think I'll save that for the next update. well ENJOY~ ^^

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PockieHoshi
PostPosted: Mon Apr 02, 2012 5:41 am 
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Cool! Another WIP from you.Seems interesting enough at first glance too :).
But do you still intend to work on your other project as well?
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MelonCandy
PostPosted: Mon Apr 02, 2012 5:57 am 
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PockieHoshi wrote:
Cool! Another WIP from you.Seems interesting enough at first glance too :).
But do you still intend to work on your other project as well?


Thank you!~
Um I kind of gave up on the conquest crystal but I'm still working on my other one Moonlight spotlight :)

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distorsion
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Looks good, especially the art. Love the 'possible CG' ("get that furry thing away from me!" lol). ^-^

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MelonCandy
PostPosted: Tue Apr 03, 2012 1:56 am 
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distorsion wrote:
Looks good, especially the art. Love the 'possible CG' ("get that furry thing away from me!" lol). ^-^


Thank you hehe ^^

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ShadowBerry
PostPosted: Tue Apr 03, 2012 6:03 am 
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Naaaah to bad Melony ;)
Id like the Crystal thing xD

Hope you see this project to the end, I already fell for Andre xD

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MelonCandy
PostPosted: Tue Apr 03, 2012 6:25 am 
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ShadowBerry wrote:
Naaaah to bad Melony ;)
Id like the Crystal thing xD

Hope you see this project to the end, I already fell for Andre xD


LOL Beeeeeeerry~ I missed you haha.
Yeah I still have the script n drawings. I MIGHT restart it if I feel like it haha.


haha yep thanks X3

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ShadowBerry
PostPosted: Tue Apr 03, 2012 6:41 am 
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hahaha missed you too :)
Yay! xD
I hope so, the story really wasnt bad ^^

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Weakjounin
PostPosted: Tue Apr 03, 2012 9:31 am 
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I love your art style <3 It looks so familiar xD
I also love FairyTale stories <3

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MelonCandy
PostPosted: Tue Apr 03, 2012 10:23 am 
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Weakjounin wrote:
I love your art style <3 It looks so familiar xD
I also love FairyTale stories <3


Haha thank you!! Yeah I tend to observe and try to imitate other artist's drawings :P

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Conquest Crystal(GxB)

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Kizhusa
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Nine tail fox? awesome :) mythological beings are so cool *A*

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Kizhusa wrote:
Nine tail fox? awesome :) mythological beings are so cool *A*


Yewwwwwwwwwp. :D They are awesomee~

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MelonCandy wrote:
Kizhusa wrote:
Nine tail fox? awesome :) mythological beings are so cool *A*


Yewwwwwwwwwp. :D They are awesomee~


I am looking forward to this :D Andre looks so cuute :wink:

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Neolem
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Funny to see so many species together. Can't wait to see the dragons.
They are all so old lol :lol:
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MelonCandy wrote:
Weakjounin wrote:
I love your art style <3 It looks so familiar xD
I also love FairyTale stories <3


Haha thank you!! Yeah I tend to observe and try to imitate other artist's drawings :P
Funny how you mention that you try to imitate other artists, because I also noticed what Weakjounin pointed out. Also saw that you had some other games too. It's a real shame that none of them were ever completed.

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