I've just finished the game. I was about to comment earlier in the afternoon but suddenly asked to go to the embassy to do some stuff.
.. But here it is...
The idea of the story was original and quite interesting. I love the title. It was too short though. There was plenty of room for development. I love the title, somehow sounds beautiful. You forgot to put credit also and it will be better if you put some music. The picture are not bad but decent for such short period of time. There are mainly two things i found unnatural in the game:
1) Lucius feelings towards Borinia. I thought it was strange that he suddenly proposed Borinia for a marriage while when the two first met Lucius without hesitation reported her to the Queen for the possibility of being an imposter. The sudden change of heart form Lucius was still too much even Borinia saved him from execution. He never really shows his affection to Borinia.. If there's any i think you should add in a scene where Lucius showed his affection towards Borinia more clearly, maybe like put something cheesy or romantic lines when Lucius sneak to her bedroom the night after he escaped from prison. I know it is classic and might be boring but i think it is still necessary to put.
2) Borinia uncertain condition. It made me asking myself why was Borinia unconscious and trapped in her dream? What specific condition or what cause her to be unable to wake up and will die if she didn't wake up? Something like the phase of being in between life and death state was flashed through my mind, it may be the possibility but the story still did not give necessary information explaining whether she was in a coma or dying state, also the cause. So for me, it certainly unclear.
Anyway, the game is decent and adorable. Let alone, it was made in such a short period of time. I'm sure if I were you i will not make it. It will be nothing or will be something not as good as this...This is the first time i give review on other's game so i'm really sorry if i made mistake on giving my opinion or if you feel offended. i didn't mean to do so. Don't get me wrong. I really appreciate your work and grateful that you share your first game here. Keep up the good work~! Ganbatte!:D... I'm looking forward for your further works... <3
P.S.: i think Aston is adorable. Even though i prefer him with short hair..
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