Waah, I'm super elated that someone gets it a lot. :,)Anna wrote:Now now, don't be such a tease :'D!Patty wrote: Hm... Part Two... Maybe?you better~
Actually, I did notice that change, it was very nice to see! I don't think you did it badly, but maybe make the focus a little more clear next time yes ^^.Patty wrote:Tegami is Captain Slow, just like the author.Tegami's utterly slow, a lot of my testers, and DarkSpartan commented about his slowness. XD At least he put the pieces together at the end.
I wanted the story to give focus on how the characters handle the situation instead of the big realization of the sickness. I don't think I highlighted that well though, ehe... ._.;; (How Sayaka handles it... Going from bitter and unaccepting to resolute about making the right decisions, Tegami just wanting to be there despite being Captain Slow )
Nah, I liked their personalities! They were all very interesting and it's not unrealistic for someone (especially teenagers) to be like that haha. Also, even though he was slow, I think Tegami was a kind and hard working guy - sooo cute :')!Patty wrote:I'm glad you liked the characters.Thought Sayaka would end up turning off readers because she might be bratty and stuff... And the crazy parents.. O_O
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Wanted to avoid the pitfalls of "sickness-drama" like in sad movies.
Thanks a lot for playing, and I'm glad to know you enjoyed. Also glad I did okay for my first time XDLetters for You [KN] [NaNoRenO 2012] : http://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewto ... 50&t=14271
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The expressions are sooooo cute!
I really enjoyed the sprites in the novel.
The story had a good sense of movement. Scenes happened in a lot of locations (which meant you needed a lot of backgrounds!)
Congratulations!
Susan
I really enjoyed the sprites in the novel.
The story had a good sense of movement. Scenes happened in a lot of locations (which meant you needed a lot of backgrounds!)
Congratulations!
Susan
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Thank you! I'm glad you liked the sprites. ^_^SusanTheCat wrote:The expressions are sooooo cute!
I really enjoyed the sprites in the novel.
The story had a good sense of movement. Scenes happened in a lot of locations (which meant you needed a lot of backgrounds!)
Congratulations!
Susan
I originally planned to draw all the backgrounds, but due to time restraints, I used Celianna's backgrounds since I really liked the nature portions. For other additional stuff, I looked for photos and filtered them.
Thanks for playing!
Letters for You [KN] [NaNoRenO 2012] : http://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewto ... 50&t=14271
Paradox [NaNoReNo 2013] WIP: http://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewto ... 50&t=19714
Museum Adventure: The Ascension of Huks http://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewto ... 11&t=28476
Paradox [NaNoReNo 2013] WIP: http://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewto ... 50&t=19714
Museum Adventure: The Ascension of Huks http://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewto ... 11&t=28476
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the story is good. like the sprites and the CGs.
Sayaka dies, right? and till the end, I don't know what her sickness is?
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Will be playing this a year later just for fun
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It says invalid or deleted file when I try to download it ;.; I really want to try this KN though.
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Link is dead D':
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Link is dead ; - ; - ^ like what she/he/it said XDD ;-;
I can do voice actings and help with the story~
Just message me if y'need help c:
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I haven't played out the game. But, the boy character design really attracts me. I love it. Will edit this after I play.
[edit] the link didn't work..:/..what a pity.. ;A;
[edit] the link didn't work..:/..what a pity.. ;A;
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The link doesn't work anymore. Awwwww...
(Pssst. Paayos nung link, pls. *puppy eyes*)
(Pssst. Paayos nung link, pls. *puppy eyes*)
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Here's a backup.
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It might be just me but I'm not able to get the online version to work.
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I've been recovering a lot of things from my old harddrive, including games that seem to have dead links now. This game I notice not only is the main link dead, but also a backup link someone else posted. Anyway, I happen to have the game, I really loved this little KN back in the day (and still do really), it really showed me how wonderful Kinetics can be if you have a good story going.
So to help preserve this lovely piece, I'm uploading it directly to this post--
So to help preserve this lovely piece, I'm uploading it directly to this post--
PROJECTS:
Operation: Magic Hero [WiP]
Piece By Piece [COMPLETE][Spooktober VN '20]
RE/COUNT RE:VERSE [COMPLETE][RPG]
Since When Did I Have a Combat Butler?! [COMPLETE][NaNoRenO2020+]
Crystal Captor: Memory Chronicle Finale [COMPLETE][RPG][#1 in So Bad It's Good jam '17]
But dear God, You're the only North Star I would follow this far
Owl City "Galaxies"
Operation: Magic Hero [WiP]
Piece By Piece [COMPLETE][Spooktober VN '20]
RE/COUNT RE:VERSE [COMPLETE][RPG]
Since When Did I Have a Combat Butler?! [COMPLETE][NaNoRenO2020+]
Crystal Captor: Memory Chronicle Finale [COMPLETE][RPG][#1 in So Bad It's Good jam '17]
But dear God, You're the only North Star I would follow this far
Owl City "Galaxies"
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