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Aaah, yes. The eyes are the once thing that still looked wrong once I considered myself done with the picture (but it was 3am and I just wanted to be done with it XD). I couldn't tell *what* was wrong exactly either, so I didn't touch it. The eyebrow relation is certainly the thing, especially since I changed one of them afterwards, but didn't change the eye in relation.
Thanks for pointing this out
The only thing I'd suggest for the future is that if you have the entire top of the scarf flat apart from a little bump either side
Mmm... so no "folds" as what I did more by reflex than conviction, gotcha
it might be better to have at least the top one a bit freer and lifting up from the hair, to show that it's only the opposite corners which are tied around her head?
I've been... around. Haven't been doing much, really. Still very much into roleplaying and other related tabletop activities (though I do more reading and getting excited about it than actually playing). VNs and Lemma's have been off my radar for quite some time now. Game making itself has also been untouched. No active project at the moment.
More recently, I've been sick, for about 3 weeks, on and off. I'm eager to get out of this state to be able to do things again @_@...
And that's pretty much it. I still have a few bursts of creativity here and there, but most of the time I'm not doing anything interesting. Which is rather depressing ^^;...
Please don't get depressed, periods of lower activity happen, especially when one is not so cheerful or a bit ill!
There are all very cute, your drawings always have this nice cuteness to them, which makes the characters you draw very endearing and fun to look at! Please hang around, it's always nice to hear from you again! :D
The picture "yc_fumika.jpg" is easily your best one. Also, I can see improvement between the first page and the third. You have gotten much better with eyes and symmetry.
Don't worry, we can get through it together. I didn't forget about you! I just got overwhelmed. https://cherylitou.wordpress.com
Thanks . Funny thing: first page was with the tablet, third page on paper. Have I truly gotten better or just gone back to my favorite medium? ^^;... oh well, hopefully it's something of both.
Here's Jin. She's a Work-in-progress character I'm going to use for a solo roleplay. Not everything about her is set in stone but here's what I know:
- She's a redhead
- She's an elf from a noble family
- She's rather "in your face"
- She has a thing for handsome guys... to the point of forgetting everything else at times.
- She's cursed. She randomly and mostly uncontrolably transforms into a feral version of herself.
Less sure about:
- She's a mercenary of some sort
- The feral ears... I wanted to go for a tiger look but I'm not satisfied.
The roleplay setting itself is not yet clearly defined either. I wanted some sort of silly anime-ish & sexy setting. My main idea was that of two medieval-fantastic heroes having to locate cursed panties (most probably actively worn) and getting rid of them. Maybe the panties control their owner... or maybe it transforms them in monsters. Not sure yet.
I still play MagBou for the same reason I still play GSK and Elven Relations - it's FUN!
I don't think I'd like Jin, based on the *in your face* piece, but she sounds great otherwise!
Regarding the feral look....it doesn't look terribly feral.....she's changed her hairstyle and has ears in a different post, but can't really tell that those are TIGER ears. The pictures are good, just the feral one needs work in my mind.
A friend is one that walks in when the world walks out.
Oh I see! It's just that I don't see myself going through ER again, for example, given how thoroughly I've played it already. Rather waiting for ER2 to sink my teeth into something shiny new!
Jin is still a WIP and I don't know if I'll like her "in your face" attitude either. Heck, the first visual drafts were a lot harsher... now she looks more mischievous than anything I think. That's one of my problems: I can hardly draw/roleplay people I wouldn't actually 100% approve if they existed. So knowing that the next character is a burglar.... I'm going to have issues again ^^;;;...
Feral look needs work then ... I didn't dare go too far with it at first, but now I think I shouldn't hold back. Crazy long hair here I come!
Ah ^^;... Well, I've had health issues these last weeks, but nothing requiring going to an hospital thankfully . ... and I *knew* these letters would lead to confusion ^^;;...