Endless Corridor[GxB][Fantasy/Mystery/Slice of Life]*UPDATE*
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Re: Endless Corridor[GxB][Fantasy/Mystery/Slice of Life]-Rem
Oh, it's cute! I like it. :3
1) What do you think of story so far?
I like the story. And also... the genre combination is interesting. Hahaha.
2) Who’s the most you want to know about?
Gene, mainly because he seems like a unique fellow, and partly because he's an albino. It's just that... we rarely have albino obtainables, and we have lots of amnesiacs. I really would like to get to know him better. And not just because of his genetic condition! (Wait, genetic condition. Gene...tic. Gene. Cool.) He just seems interesting.
I would probably go for Allen too anyway, hahahaha.
3) What do you expect from this VN?
I expect it to be fun and light, and of course, mysterious. Hahahaha. =)
A proofreader would be appreciated though, since there are some fairly obvious mistakes. ^^ Don't worry, they're pretty minor. Ah, also, one 'o' in the logo doesn't have a transparent middle.
Anyway, good luck!
1) What do you think of story so far?
I like the story. And also... the genre combination is interesting. Hahaha.
2) Who’s the most you want to know about?
Gene, mainly because he seems like a unique fellow, and partly because he's an albino. It's just that... we rarely have albino obtainables, and we have lots of amnesiacs. I really would like to get to know him better. And not just because of his genetic condition! (Wait, genetic condition. Gene...tic. Gene. Cool.) He just seems interesting.
I would probably go for Allen too anyway, hahahaha.
3) What do you expect from this VN?
I expect it to be fun and light, and of course, mysterious. Hahahaha. =)
A proofreader would be appreciated though, since there are some fairly obvious mistakes. ^^ Don't worry, they're pretty minor. Ah, also, one 'o' in the logo doesn't have a transparent middle.
Anyway, good luck!
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Re: Endless Corridor[GxB][Fantasy/Mystery/Slice of Life]-Rem
Ooh thanks for comment, another breeze for me! XDRan08 wrote:Oh, it's cute! I like it. :3
1) What do you think of story so far?
I like the story. And also... the genre combination is interesting. Hahaha.
2) Who’s the most you want to know about?
Gene, mainly because he seems like a unique fellow, and partly because he's an albino. It's just that... we rarely have albino obtainables, and we have lots of amnesiacs. I really would like to get to know him better. And not just because of his genetic condition! (Wait, genetic condition. Gene...tic. Gene. Cool.) He just seems interesting.
I would probably go for Allen too anyway, hahahaha.
3) What do you expect from this VN?
I expect it to be fun and light, and of course, mysterious. Hahahaha. =)
A proofreader would be appreciated though, since there are some fairly obvious mistakes. ^^ Don't worry, they're pretty minor. Ah, also, one 'o' in the logo doesn't have a transparent middle.
Anyway, good luck!
1) So much genre, right? (lol) You will know why when it finish
2) Aww hear that Gene? She likes you, come on say Hi! XD
Anyway there's a reason why I made he's an albino
3) Yep it will be like that
at the first
Ughh yeah I'm bad with this grammatical and tenses things, gonna find a proofreader soon orz. And for the logo, I won't realize it if you didn't say it, thanks Ran08! X'D
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Re: Endless Corridor[GxB][Fantasy/Mystery/Slice of Life]-Rem
aww the Chrysanthemum logo is awesome! I wonder if they have a significant meaning in the game OvO
and the new characters are cute too. The bright colors are very cheerful c:
Though I prefer Allen wearing black for some reason *it made him look more mysterious* xD
Will the corridor theme is also cheerful like Alice in wonderland or dark? o.o
the color palette changed from dark to bright so I'm very curious about the setting xD
and the new characters are cute too. The bright colors are very cheerful c:
Though I prefer Allen wearing black for some reason *it made him look more mysterious* xD
Will the corridor theme is also cheerful like Alice in wonderland or dark? o.o
the color palette changed from dark to bright so I'm very curious about the setting xD
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Re: Endless Corridor[GxB][Fantasy/Mystery/Slice of Life]-Rem
Ooh thank's for your comment again Miss Chiel, another breeze for me! QvQ)/ And yup, the flower will be "something" in the story XDSweetChiel wrote:aww the Chrysanthemum logo is awesome! I wonder if they have a significant meaning in the game OvO
and the new characters are cute too. The bright colors are very cheerful c:
Though I prefer Allen wearing black for some reason *it made him look more mysterious* xD
Will the corridor theme is also cheerful like Alice in wonderland or dark? o.o
the color palette changed from dark to bright so I'm very curious about the setting xD
No.. the story will be much darker than AIWL and I really really tried to use darker color palette but somehow it won't turn like that! Do you have any idea about it? ;;A;;
PS: I saw your DA and hfdkjfhadk you're from Tangerang too?
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Re: Endless Corridor[GxB][Fantasy/Mystery/Slice of Life]-Rem
Oh, I love mystery! Though if it were me, I'd be scared to death LOL. And I hope I don't have to fight that creature.
1) What do you think of story so far?
It piqued my interest! I wonder how they'll go back to their original place and whether they'll stay there or not.
2) Who’s the most you want to know about?
Gene, maybe. The fact that he always answers with unrelated things makes me think he might be hiding something.
3) What do you expect from this VN?
Mysteries solved! Plot twists! Unexpected endings!
Good luck with your game! Doing a one person project isn't easy, but once you finish it, the feeling will be satisfying!
1) What do you think of story so far?
It piqued my interest! I wonder how they'll go back to their original place and whether they'll stay there or not.
2) Who’s the most you want to know about?
Gene, maybe. The fact that he always answers with unrelated things makes me think he might be hiding something.
3) What do you expect from this VN?
Mysteries solved! Plot twists! Unexpected endings!
Good luck with your game! Doing a one person project isn't easy, but once you finish it, the feeling will be satisfying!
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Re: Endless Corridor[GxB][Fantasy/Mystery/Slice of Life]-Rem
Aah thank you for answering my questions! latereply XDAkitsuki wrote:Oh, I love mystery! Though if it were me, I'd be scared to death LOL. And I hope I don't have to fight that creature.
1) What do you think of story so far?
It piqued my interest! I wonder how they'll go back to their original place and whether they'll stay there or not.
2) Who’s the most you want to know about?
Gene, maybe. The fact that he always answers with unrelated things makes me think he might be hiding something.
3) What do you expect from this VN?
Mysteries solved! Plot twists! Unexpected endings!
Good luck with your game! Doing a one person project isn't easy, but once you finish it, the feeling will be satisfying!
1) Don't worry everything are already in my
2) Aww my little Gene got another vote! Don't forget to say thank you, 'kay?
3) Okay noted! I'll do my best to fulfill your expectations! >:3
Thank you again, Akitsuki and yeah it is ;;w;; but I determined to finish this one no matter what woohoo~! XD
-UPDATE!-
Hello everyone,
Anyway, just got time to do GUI things! :3 It was really took my time, because I'm suck at programming (all hail internet!) and drawing use mouse isn't that easy, my hand's cramps TTwTT
Here's some GUIs!
*The BGs are just placeholder and the last one isn't mine!*
And here's a sketch for main menu.
So... how it is? Any opinion or something like that? :'3 Oh and I'm sorry if it's OOT but... does anyone know why there is no screenshot thing(?) at my save files even it is saved?
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Re: Endless Corridor[GxB][Fantasy/Mystery/Slice of Life]-Rem
I love the GUI so far! OQO
*grabby hands*
As for your question, Did you make certain to define the screenshot change properly? o3o
*grabby hands*
As for your question, Did you make certain to define the screenshot change properly? o3o
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Re: Endless Corridor[GxB][Fantasy/Mystery/Slice of Life]-Rem
Oh my goodness that GUI is so damn pretty :O
Your really not helping my hype levels XD
Your really not helping my hype levels XD
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AAAH thank you very much Kisa! thatgrabbyhand you don't know how happy I am QwQbkisa wrote:I love the GUI so far! OQO
*grabby hands*
As for your question, Did you make certain to define the screenshot change properly? o3o
... OH YES you're right, deleted it by accident, gotta make it now, thanks! XD
Ajfakdhksj I really really glad and happy to hear that from you, thank you very much!! QuQ)bRinima wrote:Oh my goodness that GUI is so damn pretty :O
Your really not helping my hype levels XD
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Her default name's Arca by the way XD soo how it is? omo
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Re: Endless Corridor[GxB][Fantasy/Mystery/Slice of Life]*UPD
I'm glad my praise makes you happy. ^u^
Deleting things by accident and I are old buddies. I'm glad you found it so quickly! OuO
Arca is a pretty name. OuO (I haven't met anyone named that so it also seems weird to me. But, meh.)
Her character design would probably still match with brighter colors (since the logo is a flower) But, she looks lovely. OuOb
I used too many happy faces... OTL
Deleting things by accident and I are old buddies. I'm glad you found it so quickly! OuO
Arca is a pretty name. OuO (I haven't met anyone named that so it also seems weird to me. But, meh.)
Her character design would probably still match with brighter colors (since the logo is a flower) But, she looks lovely. OuOb
I used too many happy faces... OTL
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Re: Endless Corridor[GxB][Fantasy/Mystery/Slice of Life]*UPD
You're making a progress! Great work!! The GUIs are so simple yet elegant, I like them 8D
Well... Yeah, programming is difficult if you're not used to it yet (including me!) but at least you succeeded in making the GUIs! Congrats!!
Well... Yeah, programming is difficult if you're not used to it yet (including me!) but at least you succeeded in making the GUIs! Congrats!!
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Re: Endless Corridor[GxB][Fantasy/Mystery/Slice of Life]*UPD
Interesting~ ≧ω≦
Good luck with it!
Good luck with it!
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How.. how.. I LOVE THE GUI!! *Q* It's so.. so.. beautiful.. /melted/
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Can't wait to see the game released! >_<
Oh, anyway you've got another stalker miss Aruise :3 Keep up your good work~
Can't wait to see the game released! >_<
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