[COMPLETE] (P)lanets -GxB

[teacup]

Thanks guys, I definitely have more than enough proofreaders now.
I finally got a scanner, so I can do CGs a lot faster now. Rather than it taking 4-5 hours, it only takes me about 2 hours. I really wish I got one sooner XD

[Celestine]

How did your vacation go? I hope it relieved some of the build up stress. And sometimes some fresh air can give a clear perspective.

[teacup]

It was fine, thanks for asking Celestine
I did manage to sketch all of the CGs out (yes all of them!). Other than that, I don't really have any updates, I've been too busy to work on anything visual novel related uAu; Luckily I only have script left. Music, background, sprites are all taken care of. I may or may not customize the layouts, that depends on if I have time. CGs just need to be colored. I'm getting there!

[Nekosousei]

I'm so excited to hear you're nearly done!
The game looks great and I loved the demo. Can't wait to see the final product.

[Carmentis]

Indeed, this does look very promising! I love the idea of supernatural powers for characters. Takes me back to my old X-Men days.

I'd try the demo out but with my backlog and procrastination habits I may just wait for final ...or end up playing the demo to procrastinate on something else. Time will tell!

[teacup]

Thanks guys. I'm sure I sound like a broken record by now but I can assure you that I am nearly done, lol.

QUESTION!! I'm wanting to add unlockable character bios. However, I'm not sure what kind of things to include to their bio. Is there anything specific you guys want to know about the characters (like their favorite jelly bean flavor or something XD) If anyone answers I might add your question to the character Q&A~

Some updates: I am happy to say that the script is about 95% done. The word count was dangerously near 100,000 words, but I've cut it down to about 80,000 now. Yes I know some people like long games, but 100k was way overboard in my opinion XD
So Planets is officially on the road to completion!

[Snowflower]

Usually when I make character bios (or at least think about it), I'd include basic things like name, age, height, blood type, likes, dislikes and random quirky things about the character.

80,000 is a great word count, in my opinion

[teacup]

Yeah, I've made sure to include those things ^-^ (except for the blood type... that might be interesting!) However, if anyone would like to know anything else, you can go ahead and ask. If not I'll just stick to the basics.
Haha, about the characters' heights... In my mind, Kaius is 192cm, whereas Ryuu is about 175 and Lucan is 180... but when I tried to make Ryuu and Lucan look shorter in game, it looked soo horrible! xD
I'll still include their real height on the bio, but in game, they just all have to look the same height. Otherwise, it looks really bad.

[Gryphbear]

Yeah, I've made sure to include those things ^-^ (except for the blood type... that might be interesting!) However, if anyone would like to know anything else, you can go ahead and ask. If not I'll just stick to the basics.
Haha, about the characters' heights... In my mind, Kaius is 192cm, whereas Ryuu is about 175 and Lucan is 189... but when I tried to make Ryuu and Lucan look shorter in game, it looked soo horrible! xD
I'll still include their real height on the bio, but in game, they just all have to look the same height. Otherwise, it looks really bad.

Sounds good. Maybe include their favorite hobbies. Oh, about their height -- I'd include at least an English equivalent to the metric measurements. I have no clue what 175cm is as far as height. heh.

[Snowflower]

192cm for Kaius? That's like... really tall.

Most guys I know are 185ish I would think.

Oh and I'm about 173cm which is 5'8"

[teacup]

@Gryphbear
Oops, I'll be sure to include that! And I will put their hobbies, definitely!

@Snowflower
My brother is 204 cm :p
The tallness is to add to Kaius' intimidation factor. Many of the guys in school are afraid of him, not just because of his reputation, but because of his look. Very tall, only one eye exposed... scary!! (The funny thing is, Kaius always loses in fights)

[Snowflower]

6'10"? That's really tall!

I think my tallest friend is like that... but that's just only one. Most are around 6'4" or 5"

The funny thing is, Kaius always loses in fights

CUTEEEEEE ^^;;

[OtomeWeekend]

The tallness is to add to Kaius' intimidation factor. Many of the guys in school are afraid of him, not just because of his reputation, but because of his look. Very tall, only one eye exposed... scary!! (The funny thing is, Kaius always loses in fights)

yeah, and the moe factor I felt reached 100%. XD *is heading to hospital now due to extreme blood loss from nosebleed*

[Celestine]

Hmm How about their favorite sayings or thoughts. I always find that interesting to read in bios.

[Aka-kami]

This might help strike some inspiration: http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll21 ... kai/21.jpg

//obsessed with Yankee-kun to Megane-chan