>:3 I got all the pretty little bishie boys (excluding Haru)~! It was relatively short, but fun nonetheless. I tried to skim through all the previous posts to see if anyone else caught the same errors I did, but then I got tired -_- Prepare yourself for some concrit.
- To be honest with you, I had trouble getting through the first portion of the game. There weren't any choices at all, and I felt like I was playing a KN. At least one menu would have assured me that I was playing a VN, and programming a single menu isn't
that hard.
- I like a bit of freedom when I play my games, especially when I play VNs. I played through the game 3 times now, and I only saw the imagemap
twice during each playthrough. It was such a cute little imagemap too ;-; You could have extended gameplay time by making normal days where you pick a spot to eat and spend some time with whoever you meet up with. Spending time would increase how much each guy liked you, but it wouldn't activate an event.
- Also in regard to the above issues, I felt like the game forced me into pursuing only one character's path once I spent my second lunch day with him. I got Ryuu my first time, Lucan next, and then Kaius with a bit of difficulty. Even while I was going for Kaius, I had to return to a previous save because I ended up spending the field trip with
Ryuu despite not spending time with him whatsoever.
- I noticed times when the dialogue would go outside of the textbox sometimes. It's not exactly a bother, but a tweak to the coding would fix that easily.
And that's all I can remember
complaining reporting about. As for the boys themselves, I have this magical ability to make things sound worse than they seem when I summarize them. Therefore, prepare to have your bishies be humiliated when I impersonate them.
Kaius: Argh, I am so badass and you shouldn't associate with me- I'M GOING TO KILL YOU, RYUU!!!!!! Okay, so this is your classroom. Don't get lost. Argh, you're so stupid. Wha-What!? I-I'm not hiding a bunch of kitties... Stay away from me or else I'll kill you. What? You're doing your homework wrong. Let me help you. Hey, you want to go to the arcade with me? No, I am not wearing those cat ears. Urgh, fine. Hey, why are you talking to those thugs- F BOMBS EVERYWHERE IMMA KILL THESE THUGS!!!!!!!!! Time for a nap. Oh look, another fight with Ryuu- why the hell did you push me off the roof?! I must run away, I must run away, I must run away! *sniff sniff* Don't come near me. I killed my mom. *sniff* Oh, a hug. Let's go home. Hey, let's abscond to town and adopt a kitty. Come into my room? You mean we're going to- oh, a kiss. Fine... I decided to drop out of Planets because I love you. Happy ending.
Ryuu: Oh hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii there~! Let's be delinquents together! Happy happy fun fun, mountains are pretty from far away. KIDNAP! Mountains are pretty from far away. Want to get sick in the rain with me? Whee~! Being a delinquent who has to repeat a year of high school is so much fun~! Aaahh... I am very sick. ... I am better now! Let's go swing! Ha, I beat you. Be my girl or else I'll be sad. *sniff* I am sad... I don't care that you almost got raped. Aha! Another duel with my sworn nemesis, Kaius! Oh noez, I'll save you- ARGH! I'm hurt. I-I don't have much time left. Kiss me. A-Are you leaving? O-Okay... I am back for you, my love. Nap time! Happy end.
Lucan: I am so pretty and sparkly, and I don't know what to do with my fangirls. Have some cake. Huh? Oh, let us escape from the fangirls- ARGH WHY ARE YOU ON TOP OF ME?! I-I'm sorry... Want some cake? Let's go for a walk in town, whee~! A-A date?! U-Um... Oh, you have ice cream on your hand. Let me get that for you *proceeds to lick hand like a creeper* O-Oh, I'm sorry! I must run away, I must run away, I must run away! I don't care that you almost got raped. Um... let's bake cake together! I.. have a dark secret that I've been hiding from you. I... have been brainwashing people into loving me because I am so unloved and sad. I-I'm so pathetic... Y-You love me? A-Ah... OH NOEZ THE COOKIES (I was confused when the cookies burned, because I was under the impression that they were making cake)!!! Um... please break up with me. I can't go to school- oh yay a kiss! Okay, laterz. ... Huh?! Why are you here? Oh well, let's make out. Happy end.
I probably missed a couple plot points, but you get the point. I found Lucan to be a bit disappointing, and he could have had more potential. I liked Ryuu the best, and even then I don't feel that emotionally attached to him. I feel like the game overall had much more potential, and I'd like to see an updated version of the game with more
fanservice story. I
am waiting for a sequel so make one already really want to see more from you, so keep at it!