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PostPosted: Mon Nov 14, 2011 4:26 pm 
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--Artist sort of disappeared on me, might as well put this on hold for now.--


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PostPosted: Mon Nov 14, 2011 4:36 pm 
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This sounds interesting. :D I can't judge it any further though beside on what you have before. You got yourself a stalker though! Can't wait to see what the screenshots of the game. :)

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PostPosted: Mon Nov 14, 2011 5:04 pm 
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Ooh! I love a good locked-room mystery! :)
It's hard to really offer feedback on such a general summery, but that's okay! I don't want to know how he was killed until I play it!
I guess the only thing that struck me as odd was the name "Waltz," but that's what we generally call a minor matter. :P


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PostPosted: Mon Nov 14, 2011 5:10 pm 
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--Artist sort of disappeared on me, might as well put this on hold for now.--


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PostPosted: Mon Nov 14, 2011 6:31 pm 
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No problem, man. I have the same problem but let some people to read it and tell you what they think. Don't get discourage if you don't get a lot comments on this thread. Some people just stalk threads without saying thing( I kinda of do that sometimes.)

If you need any help just hit me up with an pm. :3

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PostPosted: Mon Nov 14, 2011 7:07 pm 
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Thanks! Yeah, you're right, I guess I should have something in the topic at least. I edited an excerpt into the opening post just so that it wouldn't look so...empty, until I got the screenshots, haha.


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PostPosted: Mon Nov 14, 2011 8:03 pm 
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This sounds interesting to me! I can't offer any real criticisms, but just based on the premise, it sounds like something I'd be willing to give a try.

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PostPosted: Mon Nov 14, 2011 8:28 pm 
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Ahhh I have always loved murder mystery novels - I'll definitely be the one eager to point the finger and accuse the killer! Caaan't wait for screenshots.


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PostPosted: Mon Nov 14, 2011 11:42 pm 
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A gentleman thief who announces what he's going to steal and when. Reminds me of a certain thief....(Kaitou Kiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiid yosh!) And a case of a murder when no footprints in the snow. Reminds me of a case in Detective Conan. >:3 You have caught my interest. Hope you thought of another way that it was done otherwise it would take the fun out of solving the murder.

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PostPosted: Tue Nov 15, 2011 12:19 am 
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Sunlit-Dreamer wrote:
A gentleman thief who announces what he's going to steal and when. Reminds me of a certain thief....(Kaitou Kiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiid yosh!) And a case of a murder when no footprints in the snow. Reminds me of a case in Detective Conan. >:3 You have caught my interest. Hope you thought of another way that it was done otherwise it would take the fun out of solving the murder.


Don't worry, I definitely wouldn't do something like copying a trick from another series. That's the lowest of lows among mystery writers. That much I can promise you, I'm not copying any tricks haha.

The 'gentleman thief' part isn't inspired by Kaitou Kid though, it's inspired by Arsène Lupin(who in turn inspired Kaitou Kid from Conan).


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PostPosted: Tue Nov 15, 2011 3:40 pm 
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Van Knox wrote:
The 'gentleman thief' part isn't inspired by Kaitou Kid though, it's inspired by Arsène Lupin(who in turn inspired Kaitou Kid from Conan).


Did someone say Lupin?


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PostPosted: Tue Nov 15, 2011 3:57 pm 
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I love mystery. I already see a few nods towards other authors, which makes me happy.
Best of luck! *stalks*

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PostPosted: Fri Nov 18, 2011 9:07 am 
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This sounds really intriguing! The premise caught my interest and, well, it isn't everyday that you see a murder mystery VN. :'D

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PostPosted: Fri Nov 18, 2011 9:24 am 
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It sounds pretty interesting so far. I'll be keeping my eye on this <3


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