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Hello again, forumites! It's your 'ol pal, Broodelin, looking for a little help with her next project.

Essentially, I'm looking for editors/critiquers who would be willing to look over the script of my work-in-progress game, Sunny South Seoul, and give honest feedback on its style, themes, execution, and atmosphere.

Approximately 3,000 words have been completed at this time, so it should be fairly light reading to begin with.

In return, I'm willing to do the same for your/person of your choosing's visual novel script. Plus, as an added incentive, I'll also help design the UI and offer coding assistance if necessary.

Please reply here or PM me if you're interested or want more information.

Oh hey, it's you! I wouldn't mind critiquing your VN since you helped me with mine.

I'd be more than happy to help!

Thanks to the both of you! I'll send you guys a PM when I get back to my desktop.

Hey if you still need more editors/critiquers/friends, I'd be happy to help! =D

Thanks for the offer

I'll PM you.

Hello ! We're already in touch with another project but just wanted to say I'm interested in chipping in for this one as well. Thanks!

You're such a nice person, I'd love to help!

Thanks everybody!

I'll be sending PMs to everyone tonight.

Hey id love to help! I doubt your still up though. Im new to this forum and im trying to be active on this forum!

If you still need editors/critiquers, I'm willing to help out.

@sailormarymoon: On the thread for the game, Broodelin wrote that there are some very big issues going on in her family life right now, and that the game is on hiatus.

Thanks for letting me know. I forgot to edit my post after I checked the game thread out.

I hope everything goes well.