Problems with fitting the character.
Posted: Thu Sep 17, 2015 2:22 pm
How do you guys cope when you end up with a character you really like, but you just cant fit her/him into then story?
Because I am really having trouble with this character:
Heroine #2: Izumi Riyo (WIP)
Gender: Girl
Age: 15
Background: Born in a poor family, she didn’t have much, but her family always made sure she had everything, she received good education and manners, she was always a quiet and timid girl, but she always helped those that she could help, she was highly regarded in her neighborhood for helping out. However one day she returns to home to find out that her family was being evicted so that a tower block could be built. She and her family were homeless for a year, still she didn’t back down, she started to watch people, she could tell who was who, she developed the ability to never forget a face, soon she would be able to do even more, she would be able to read a person just from looking at her face. As soon as her father managed to get a job, they managed to move into a house it was small and moldy but it was a home, the company noticed Riyo’s dad enthusiasm and gave him a better position in the company, and soon he started to become important in the company. Riyo life was improving, but again her precious life was taken by a storm when her father was murdered by a rival faction in the company. After that day Riyo and her mother have been living with her mother’s sister, she became even quieter, during the first two years she was as cold as liquid nitrogen, however she suddenly started to help out others again, however she would barely speak, but it didn’t matter, everyone was happy she was coming back to society. One of dad’s coworkers, in an act of compassion for the family insisted in founding Riyo’s study. After a dealing with her initial reluctance she joined a
School
Personality:Cold, Rational(Classical Kuudere), Capable and Suspicious of others.
Because I am really having trouble with this character:
Heroine #2: Izumi Riyo (WIP)
Gender: Girl
Age: 15
Background: Born in a poor family, she didn’t have much, but her family always made sure she had everything, she received good education and manners, she was always a quiet and timid girl, but she always helped those that she could help, she was highly regarded in her neighborhood for helping out. However one day she returns to home to find out that her family was being evicted so that a tower block could be built. She and her family were homeless for a year, still she didn’t back down, she started to watch people, she could tell who was who, she developed the ability to never forget a face, soon she would be able to do even more, she would be able to read a person just from looking at her face. As soon as her father managed to get a job, they managed to move into a house it was small and moldy but it was a home, the company noticed Riyo’s dad enthusiasm and gave him a better position in the company, and soon he started to become important in the company. Riyo life was improving, but again her precious life was taken by a storm when her father was murdered by a rival faction in the company. After that day Riyo and her mother have been living with her mother’s sister, she became even quieter, during the first two years she was as cold as liquid nitrogen, however she suddenly started to help out others again, however she would barely speak, but it didn’t matter, everyone was happy she was coming back to society. One of dad’s coworkers, in an act of compassion for the family insisted in founding Riyo’s study. After a dealing with her initial reluctance she joined a
School
Personality:Cold, Rational(Classical Kuudere), Capable and Suspicious of others.