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Translucent (To Play Unzip the File)

Posted: Fri Mar 18, 2016 9:02 am
by hitokomomo
Summary: Hitoko, a girl, spends her summer vacations on a small port and meets certain people.
There are 4 different endings.
To play this without error unzip the game first and then click on the exe.

It's the first game so quality of work is not quite there yet...
The story's very short and fairy simple.
:D Hope you enjoy.

Re: Translucent

Posted: Fri Mar 18, 2016 11:01 am
by Shiva_Production
Good job on finishing your first game.

I can't open it because something is missing, I don't know if it's me or the game itself.
I did however see your sprite art and background art, what is a good choice in my opinion.
I hope it will work so I can really give you a feedback, but for now it seems interesting and the assets used are good.

Re: Translucent

Posted: Fri Mar 18, 2016 11:15 am
by hitokomomo
Does that mean you couldn't play the game?
I'll try to see the problem with it.
Oh and I also have a question concerning the backgrounds.
I had taken them randomly from the internet but I also heard that could lead to legal issues.

Re: Translucent

Posted: Fri Mar 18, 2016 11:19 am
by Shiva_Production
hitokomomo wrote:Does that mean you couldn't play the game?
I'll try to see the problem with it.
Oh and I also have a question concerning the backgrounds.
I had taken them randomly from the internet but I also heard that could lead to legal issues.
Yes, I couldn't play it since somethign was missing. it wouldn't start.

And the bg's are fine as long as no one has put a claim on it. you can probably see it if you go to the page where they shared it.

Also if you want good and free bg's go check out a few sites that someone sgared on this:

Free to use Resources!

Re: Translucent

Posted: Fri Mar 18, 2016 11:25 am
by hitokomomo
Shiva_Production wrote:
hitokomomo wrote:Does that mean you couldn't play the game?
I'll try to see the problem with it.
Oh and I also have a question concerning the backgrounds.
I had taken them randomly from the internet but I also heard that could lead to legal issues.
Yes, I couldn't play it since somethign was missing. it wouldn't start.

And the bg's are fine as long as no one has put a claim on it. you can probably see it if you go to the page where they shared it.

Also if you want good and free bg's go check out a few sites that someone sgared on this:

Free to use Resources!
Yeah, I know why it's not working. I will fix this asap and reload it :shock:

Re: Translucent (To Play Unzip the File)

Posted: Sat Mar 19, 2016 6:04 pm
by Shiva_Production
Yeah it works now ^^

Anyhow here is my feedback:

First, it could use some music, it brings in a bit more emotions in the gameplay.
Second, I like the routes, they are really nice and not too rushed even for a short game.

The BG's are nice as well as the Sprites, good choice.

Overall for a first game it seems good, in the future we will see what good you will bring out!

Re: Translucent (To Play Unzip the File)

Posted: Sun Mar 20, 2016 2:38 am
by hitokomomo
Shiva_Production wrote:Yeah it works now ^^

Anyhow here is my feedback:

First, it could use some music, it brings in a bit more emotions in the gameplay.
Second, I like the routes, they are really nice and not too rushed even for a short game.

The BG's are nice as well as the Sprites, good choice.

Overall for a first game it seems good, in the future we will see what good you will bring out!
Haha, thank you so much! :D
I'll try harder next time too!