Oh, right, I meant, "Hendra". I needed to know your name because I added Nice Day to vndb, the visual novel database.Applegate wrote:Is there a specific reason you'd like to know my name? It's correct attribution as I submitted it myself, although "Henra" would be a typo.
'Nice Day' - short kinetic novel
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Re: 'Nice Day' - short kinetic novel
I thought it was quite nice. The text speed was a bit irksome, but just clicking twice to make the text appear all at once fixed it.
The plot was a bit *generic* but nice anyway, a good short little read imo
The plot was a bit *generic* but nice anyway, a good short little read imo
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Re: 'Nice Day' - short kinetic novel
The plot was good... but the story felt incomplete...
But apart that it was a good read...
But apart that it was a good read...
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Hello!
Wow, it's been a while since someone bumped up this topic! I actually made an updated remake, which I feel is better than what I presented here. Still, I am glad you enjoyed it, even if it felt incomplete.
Thank you.
Wow, it's been a while since someone bumped up this topic! I actually made an updated remake, which I feel is better than what I presented here. Still, I am glad you enjoyed it, even if it felt incomplete.
Thank you.
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Really good one ...
I've enjoyed it so much, that I was sad, when the 'fin' screen has appeared ...
Story is short, but the writing is just so natural, like I would really hear that story, from that bus driver :3
Loved it ! Downloading second part already
Keep up doing more things like this !
I've enjoyed it so much, that I was sad, when the 'fin' screen has appeared ...
Story is short, but the writing is just so natural, like I would really hear that story, from that bus driver :3
Loved it ! Downloading second part already
Keep up doing more things like this !
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