First of all, congratulations for completing your first game!:D
I found the story to be quite repetitive after a while...there's way too much interaction that doesn't contribute to anything; it's
basically a walkthrough of the town and not enough focus on Katherine herself. To correct this, I would give her more of a backstory. More then just "I just moved here, my mom died, ect." Because I noticed even in the end, it didn't matter anyway.
I think I got all the endings. I got three for sure, but there was
one where you decide not to make her tired in the cafe
where I didn't get a confirmation that it was 4/4, just the credits.
And all these endings are almost practically the same! For the first "normal" three, the only differences are that you decided to read further. Even in the longest one, you didn't get closer to Katherine then you did in the two shorter ones. Adding some simple surprises (like maybe meeting up with the player's friends) are enough.
And the more "advanced" one where you bring Katherine to the beautiful spot...eh. There was no real conclusion. Even though it's just one day, couldn't you have added more then the bus scene that we've seen three endings before?
Otherwise, decent art (more expressions would be nice), good BG selection, and good music.*leaves the game on just so she can hear it* XD
Hope you don't take this harshly. I think this could be a great game if you added more elements to it.
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