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Detective Dick Gumshoe!


He's very funny, and a little dim-witted, pal. But...


He's not Moe! Someone make him Moe, please!

Great first attempt, but I'll be honest, change the main tune and sound. Love the congo/drum loop, though your clap stands out too much. Maybe adjust the volume there.

But yes, the main tune needs change, variation, and a better key change. Don't lose heart, you're well on your way!

||GV

Well, I finished reading the whole thing, and wow! I have to admit, it was extremely well written and pretty entertaining too! I have a couple of niggles that i'll describe though. firstly, is what is your audience? by the style of writing and story, I'd say this could quite easily be a teen novel, ...

Any reason for shorter? Seems to have come out of the blue, that statement!

Thank you very much for the praise and tips guys! With regards to inserting the script, it's certainly possibly, but I'll have to finish writing the alternative endings first, but certainly my first priority is to get that done, and inserted in with a good GUI. You're right, it is a good idea so tha...

Read the first few posts, liking it so far! Got work to do, but bookmarked! Will report back

So, thought I'd tell you guys about my new project Missing Link (it's a working title, I'm unsure!) It's a mostly serious, story based VN that I've been setting on for the best part of a year, while I get things all together. Script is in a strange state, more details to follow, and work will be sta...

Hello! New to the boards, thought I'd start here! I'm a 21 (22 at the end of the month) year old guy based in the UK (In Reading, home of the festival!) and currently working in temp office positions while I sort something better out! Studied for many years in Music and Production, and currently sav...