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by GViper
Mon Oct 22, 2007 1:59 am
Forum: General Discussion
Topic: Make it Moe! A Drawination Challenge
Replies: 125
Views: 17997

Re: Make it Moe! A Drawination Challenge

Detective Dick Gumshoe!
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He's very funny, and a little dim-witted, pal. But...


He's not Moe! Someone make him Moe, please!
by GViper
Mon Oct 22, 2007 1:47 am
Forum: General Discussion
Topic: My very first (and crappy) attempt at Composing music...
Replies: 7
Views: 1269

Re: My very first (and crappy) attempt at Composing music...

Great first attempt, but I'll be honest, change the main tune and sound. Love the congo/drum loop, though your clap stands out too much. Maybe adjust the volume there.

But yes, the main tune needs change, variation, and a better key change. Don't lose heart, you're well on your way!

||GV
by GViper
Mon Oct 22, 2007 1:41 am
Forum: General Discussion
Topic: Ultimate Dream: I got my novel released!
Replies: 6
Views: 1664

Re: Ultimate Dream: I got my novel released!

Well, I finished reading the whole thing, and wow! I have to admit, it was extremely well written and pretty entertaining too! I have a couple of niggles that i'll describe though. firstly, is what is your audience? by the style of writing and story, I'd say this could quite easily be a teen novel, ...
by GViper
Thu Oct 18, 2007 7:46 am
Forum: Ideas
Topic: Among the Fangirls (text version 1.1 available; recruiting)
Replies: 27
Views: 5266

Re: Among the Fangirls (To Be Written by November 1)

Any reason for shorter? Seems to have come out of the blue, that statement!
by GViper
Wed Oct 17, 2007 1:48 pm
Forum: Ideas
Topic: Missing Link (working title)
Replies: 3
Views: 1023

Re: Missing Link (working title)

Thank you very much for the praise and tips guys! With regards to inserting the script, it's certainly possibly, but I'll have to finish writing the alternative endings first, but certainly my first priority is to get that done, and inserted in with a good GUI. You're right, it is a good idea so tha...
by GViper
Mon Oct 15, 2007 6:32 pm
Forum: General Discussion
Topic: Ultimate Dream: I got my novel released!
Replies: 6
Views: 1664

Re: Ultimate Dream: I got my novel released!

Read the first few posts, liking it so far! Got work to do, but bookmarked! Will report back :D
by GViper
Mon Oct 15, 2007 6:27 pm
Forum: Ideas
Topic: Missing Link (working title)
Replies: 3
Views: 1023

Missing Link (working title)

So, thought I'd tell you guys about my new project Missing Link (it's a working title, I'm unsure!) It's a mostly serious, story based VN that I've been setting on for the best part of a year, while I get things all together. Script is in a strange state, more details to follow, and work will be sta...
by GViper
Mon Oct 15, 2007 5:23 pm
Forum: Anime & Game Fan Connection
Topic: I guess I'll go first! ^_^
Replies: 46
Views: 40876

Re: I guess I'll go first! ^_^

Hello! New to the boards, thought I'd start here! I'm a 21 (22 at the end of the month) year old guy based in the UK (In Reading, home of the festival!) and currently working in temp office positions while I sort something better out! Studied for many years in Music and Production, and currently sav...