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Brilliant idea; not bad writing. I don't think the auto-forward was a good idea. It was paced okay, but slower than I would normally read it, and I didn't see that it really needed to paced so specifically. Likewise, I think "a kinetic sound novel" is a little pedantic. It's better to avoi...

Thanks; I don't think there's any problem with the mediafire link, though.

That's funny; it's been linking fine for me. New website on free host, hey; I guess they review 'em when they're edited.

Anyway, thanks for the tips; I've edited my post accordingly.

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