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Funny and sweet. Kisa was great, I liked Michi's friendship with her and Michi's bold ninja-like crawling abilities.

Thank you! That's actually one of the things I'm unsure about. How much pose variation should there be? As much as possible? Or is it better to remain more or less consistent? Some variation is unavoidable if I want to convey emotion without facial expressions, but is there a line I shouldn't cross...

Sprites like these would be cute, Fox's pose and coloring especially.

"You've reached a weird ending...

CONGRATULATIONS!"

Ahaha. Wait...all of these endings are weird...

That was pretty enjoyable.

This looks really cool. I like how she's just chilling with the knife in her neck like "yeah, I'm fine : |" Is the little bird a familiar?

I am loving the moody Netherworld backgrounds. The Earth backgrounds could use more polish, and there are various spelling & grammar errors. Hime's imperious and vain personality comes across well. A little more backstory about the Netherworld would make the implications of the curse more understand...

I suggest moving the eyebrows up higher and maybe widening them if needed. The low placement on the face and similarity to the skin shading color makes them look like eyelids.

The Illustrated Man by Ray Bradbury. A collection of sci-fi short stories, for "The Veldt" because it's massively creepy.

Green Angel by Alice Hoffman. Another short thing, strange and sad.

I love the idea of mixing pokemon with a dress-up minigame, it's like my favorite genres in one. Are you going to have any other poses? The amount of work could add up pretty quick. Hmm... maybe I should get rid of the abs... idk. Thank though! :D What if you took out or shortened the vertical line ...

Hey guys, I'm Thyroid and artist from the US. I'm working with a group of people on my first vn so I just thought I'd check this place out, maybe pick up some tips. : )