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by Thyroid
Sat Mar 16, 2013 1:18 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Get Dumped ☆
Replies: 135
Views: 111985

Re: Get Dumped ☆

Funny and sweet. Kisa was great, I liked Michi's friendship with her and Michi's bold ninja-like crawling abilities.
by Thyroid
Sat Mar 02, 2013 5:52 am
Forum: WiP: NaNoRenO
Topic: Leap [VN][NaNo2013][friendship][adventure]
Replies: 12
Views: 1691

Re: Leap [VN][NaNo2013][friendship][adventure]

Thank you! That's actually one of the things I'm unsure about. How much pose variation should there be? As much as possible? Or is it better to remain more or less consistent? Some variation is unavoidable if I want to convey emotion without facial expressions, but is there a line I shouldn't cross...
by Thyroid
Sat Mar 02, 2013 3:08 am
Forum: WiP: NaNoRenO
Topic: Leap [VN][NaNo2013][friendship][adventure]
Replies: 12
Views: 1691

Re: Leap [VN][NaNo2013][friendship][adventure]

Sprites like these would be cute, Fox's pose and coloring especially.
by Thyroid
Mon Sep 03, 2012 12:51 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Mori no Monogatari [fantasy] [comedy] [gxb]
Replies: 42
Views: 26710

Re: Mori no Monogatari [fantasy] [comedy] [otome]

"You've reached a weird ending...

CONGRATULATIONS!"

Ahaha. Wait...all of these endings are weird...

That was pretty enjoyable.
by Thyroid
Sat Mar 03, 2012 4:28 pm
Forum: WiP: NaNoRenO
Topic: The Knife of the Traitor [2012]_DONE!...Now I can sleep!
Replies: 51
Views: 7779

Re: The Knife of the Traitor [2012]

This looks really cool. I like how she's just chilling with the knife in her neck like "yeah, I'm fine : |" Is the little bird a familiar?
by Thyroid
Wed Feb 08, 2012 5:03 pm
Forum: Demos & Beta Testing
Topic: Yuki Academy [GxG][GxB]
Replies: 7
Views: 5144

Re: Yuki Academy [GxG][GxB]

I am loving the moody Netherworld backgrounds. The Earth backgrounds could use more polish, and there are various spelling & grammar errors. Hime's imperious and vain personality comes across well. A little more backstory about the Netherworld would make the implications of the curse more understand...
by Thyroid
Tue Feb 07, 2012 12:48 am
Forum: Asset Creation: Art
Topic: Looking for critique and feedback - Kazegen
Replies: 10
Views: 1315

Re: Looking for critique and feedback - Kazegen

I suggest moving the eyebrows up higher and maybe widening them if needed. The low placement on the face and similarity to the skin shading color makes them look like eyelids.
by Thyroid
Mon Feb 06, 2012 11:50 pm
Forum: General Discussion
Topic: Any recommended books?
Replies: 44
Views: 3187

Re: Any recommended books?

The Illustrated Man by Ray Bradbury. A collection of sci-fi short stories, for "The Veldt" because it's massively creepy.

Green Angel by Alice Hoffman. Another short thing, strange and sad.
by Thyroid
Wed Dec 21, 2011 10:36 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Art
Topic: Pokemon Trainer Dress-Up
Replies: 10
Views: 7310

Re: Pokemon Trainer Dress-Up

I love the idea of mixing pokemon with a dress-up minigame, it's like my favorite genres in one. Are you going to have any other poses? The amount of work could add up pretty quick. Hmm... maybe I should get rid of the abs... idk. Thank though! :D What if you took out or shortened the vertical line ...
by Thyroid
Mon Dec 05, 2011 12:09 am
Forum: Welcome!
Topic: Guestbook
Replies: 5267
Views: 1254726

Re: Guestbook

Hey guys, I'm Thyroid and artist from the US. I'm working with a group of people on my first vn so I just thought I'd check this place out, maybe pick up some tips. : )