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- Mon Jan 02, 2012 11:42 pm
- Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
- Topic: Izumi's Writing [would like some critique/ proofreading]
- Replies: 3
- Views: 3002
Re: Izumi's Writing [would like some critique/ proofreading]
That was amazing. I can feel the frustration that your main character and Riandur feels when they cannot log out. Really authentic feel, and I love the premise. The beginning was a little slow and I am not quite sure why that girl is so concerned about what your main character is doing. Are they dat...
- Mon Jan 02, 2012 11:27 pm
- Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
- Topic: Some writing for my first little game... Critique please ^_^
- Replies: 12
- Views: 5534
Re: Some writing for my first little game... Critique please
I liked it. The word "suddenly" was used a bit too much, and you should have said "cease" instead of "seize" (cease=to stop; seize=to take ) I imagine that it is going to be fantastic when you add pictures.
- Tue Dec 27, 2011 4:01 pm
- Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
- Topic: purple_pockets' Ideas and Writing Samples
- Replies: 2
- Views: 2734
purple_pockets' Ideas and Writing Samples
As the title suggests, here I will be posting various ideas for VNs or KNs and perhaps some samples of my writing. I am rather new to doing projects of any sort, so if any of these sound interesting, I'll write a short piece based on the idea. I am posting this here because I feel that the Ideas Dum...
- Tue Dec 27, 2011 3:18 pm
- Forum: Creator Discussion
- Topic: Alter ego+The sims 3 = Beautiful life game
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1696
Re: Alter ego+The sims 3 = Beautiful life game
It sounds like an interesting idea, but why shouldn't I just play "The Sims 3"? Is there something going on at the time? Maybe you could add some political intrigue, some danger? Is the girl running from something? Why should I care about all these statistics? Does it do anything for her? ...
- Tue Dec 27, 2011 11:56 am
- Forum: Creative Commons
- Topic: A couple of free background art (CC BY 3.0)
- Replies: 20
- Views: 16635
Re: [Goodies] A couple of free backgrounds
Amazing! I love how these look!
I might just make a visual novel based on this scene. It looks so cool.
I know this is a bit off topic, but where do you place images in the ren'py directory? I tried to put an image in a game yesterday, but the software said it couldn't find it...
I might just make a visual novel based on this scene. It looks so cool.
I know this is a bit off topic, but where do you place images in the ren'py directory? I tried to put an image in a game yesterday, but the software said it couldn't find it...
- Sun Dec 25, 2011 9:11 pm
- Forum: Creator Discussion
- Topic: Low self-esteem in making a game. What do you do?
- Replies: 29
- Views: 3857
Re: Low self-esteem in making a game. What do you do?
I know I posted this in another thread, but someone suggested that I ask this here, since its kinda similar: I know that I previously posted some reasons that sometimes keep me going on something, but how do you start when you are convinced that your ideas are, well, crappy? How do you even begin so...
- Sun Dec 25, 2011 8:49 pm
- Forum: Creator Discussion
- Topic: Low Esteem/Motivation (warning: contains some whining)
- Replies: 9
- Views: 1089
Low Esteem/Motivation (warning: contains some whining)
Forgive me if this sounds really whiny... :cry: I really, really want to make a visual novel of some sort, but every time I begin something stops me. Something like well, this is going to be just another waste of someone's time or I don't even know what I want to do... I never know where to begin. I...
- Sat Dec 24, 2011 11:57 pm
- Forum: Creator Discussion
- Topic: Ideas Dump
- Replies: 1532
- Views: 219284
Re: Ideas Dump
Forgive me if these ideas are dumb. I have been drooling over the idea of a BL otome game recently, but I am reluctant to post it because it might either be dumb or weird. Also, my parents might look at me funny for being interested in something like that. :oops: If you really must know, it would de...
- Sat Dec 24, 2011 10:24 pm
- Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
- Topic: Can someone help me describe a certain situation?
- Replies: 12
- Views: 16711
Re: Can someone help me describe a certain situation?
In the case that I might offend you somehow unintentionally, please forgive me if I say something blatantly obvious. Please keep in mind that I am in no way, shape, or form fluent in any other language than English, and have little experience speaking other languages. I really appreciate how well yo...
- Fri Dec 23, 2011 12:57 am
- Forum: Creator Discussion
- Topic: Revelations on Writing
- Replies: 6
- Views: 898
Revelations on Writing
Revelations on Writing I haven't written any visual novels yet because I am always stuck on the story. I have found out a few things after trying to make a story pop out of my head for months. Please post anything that you think is important for an aspiring game creator like myself to know. I have j...
- Thu Dec 22, 2011 11:52 pm
- Forum: General Discussion
- Topic: LSF Forum Mandates - Completed Games
- Replies: 11
- Views: 1660
Re: LSF Forum Mandates - Completed Games
When I first found this forum, I noticed that it seemed a bit disorganized (although now it doesn't bother me as much). I think that it is a great idea. Maybe a forum for people that have completed games, and one for those who have played it? I don't know. I do know that if I were a game creator, I ...
- Thu Dec 22, 2011 11:16 pm
- Forum: General Discussion
- Topic: Goodbye From Lemma - Thank you for 9 years of VNs
- Replies: 59
- Views: 9085
Re: Goodbye From Lemma - Thank you for 9 years of VNs
I know how frustrating this type of person can be-they are beyond reason. I know this is cliche, but actions speak louder than words when it comes to someone's personality. This type of person really isn't mad at you. He is mad at his mom or dad or something like that. For some reason, instead of ge...
- Thu Dec 22, 2011 9:27 pm
- Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
- Topic: Aileo's Writing [Desperate for Improvement!]
- Replies: 3
- Views: 3267
Re: Aileo's Writing [Desperate for Improvement!]
@Rewritten Ennui: I am not so sure if she wants it to sound like that. :D (first couple of sentences) I think she was going for a certain feel, and I felt that I was in a medieval fairy tale when I read those first two sentences. But I really understand what you were trying to say. The way you put i...
- Thu Dec 22, 2011 8:13 pm
- Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
- Topic: Advice for Coming Up With Character Names
- Replies: 31
- Views: 11500
Re: Advice for Coming Up With Character Names
@at Tsundere Lightning: I love the name Cassandra for that very reason. Maybe it could be used in a horror story (I actually thought about using the name "Cassie" in a horror story. She would see dead people, and the dead would somehow know what was going on in the universe. Of course, eve...
- Thu Dec 22, 2011 7:59 pm
- Forum: Skill Development
- Topic: Fonts in Ren'py
- Replies: 1
- Views: 3617
Fonts in Ren'py
I went through the tutorial game, and found that you could change the font of the text, but saw nothing about how to do so. Do you have to define what font you wish to use? If so, please tell me the script. p.s. If this isn't supposed to be posted here or something, please let me know. I don't want ...