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by vilkacis
Wed Jul 25, 2012 2:09 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Bliss Stage - [GxB] [GxG] [BxG] [BxB] [Sci-Fi] [RPG]
Replies: 42
Views: 17826

Re: [BxG] [BxB] [Sci-Fi] [RPG] Bliss Stage LIYW - NEW! Demo

Found more stuff. http://i.imgur.com/CCTdz.jpg "Peices" of work. Also I saw you using italics later on, so I'd recommend doing that instead of CAPS whenever possible. http://i.imgur.com/jB7RY.jpg Don't need the second ... http://i.imgur.com/8i54s.jpg Extra S in "he'ss" http://i.i...
by vilkacis
Sun Jan 29, 2012 8:27 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Bliss Stage - [GxB] [GxG] [BxG] [BxB] [Sci-Fi] [RPG]
Replies: 42
Views: 17826

Re: [BxG] [BxB] [Sci-Fi] [RPG] Bliss Stage: Love is Your Wea

More stuff. http://i.imgur.com/Us7m9.jpg Missing question mark at the end. http://i.imgur.com/WbD9v.jpg Makes more sense if the first line is actually said, instead of narration. http://i.imgur.com/ZyqAp.jpg Missing a space after the dash. http://i.imgur.com/LEuDO.jpg Should be "its own reward&...
by vilkacis
Sun Jan 29, 2012 1:29 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Bliss Stage - [GxB] [GxG] [BxG] [BxB] [Sci-Fi] [RPG]
Replies: 42
Views: 17826

Re: [BxG] [BxB] [Sci-Fi] [RPG] Bliss Stage: Love is Your Wea

I was told this is where bug and typo reports should go. Just tried the demo. It was interesting. Caught one thing towards the end, after this choice: http://i.imgur.com/UwpJVl.png http://i.imgur.com/kQZD1l.png Edit: also, your sig has an "end italics" tag where it should have a "begi...