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by Kiki
Fri Sep 26, 2014 1:08 pm
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: How can I stop making sexist games?
Replies: 102
Views: 10506

Re: How can I stop making sexist games?

:mrgreen: guess I need to step back and redeem myself. people see me as a hardcore sexist now. You say you're not trying to be sexist, but the views you're representing are very sexist. Not all men like sports or the others things you're trying to be clever about suggesting. Not all women like deta...
by Kiki
Fri Sep 26, 2014 12:58 pm
Forum: General Discussion
Topic: Would you read fanfiction of your own game/project?
Replies: 24
Views: 3395

Re: Would you read fanfiction of your own game/project?

If a project is ongoing, if there was a potential for sequels or it was part of an unfinished series, than it's a really, really bad idea to read any fan-fiction (if any exists). Like you said, it's easy to be influenced by the ideas in the fics and that can open up a lot of legal issues. Even if it...
by Kiki
Wed Aug 20, 2014 11:39 am
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: Where does "own content" start? And Copyright Issues?
Replies: 29
Views: 2553

Re: [Discussion] Where does "own content" start?

If my child spents hours in the woods to find a stone he can give me for my birthday, I would way more happy and proud of it than if he just grabbed that stone outside the moment he realized he forgot my birthday. Time and Effort are valuable things. Even more in office jobs, even though because of...
by Kiki
Sat Aug 16, 2014 10:50 pm
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: Places in a rural town?
Replies: 8
Views: 1047

Re: Places in a rural town?

If you're talking about rural America, it can depend on what part of the nation you're talking about. I live in the Bible Belt area and we have far more churches than stores/businesses. There's around 15 churches in my town compared to about half a dozen stores/resturants/etc. No matter what area yo...
by Kiki
Mon Jul 14, 2014 2:57 am
Forum: Creative Commons
Topic: Rozume's Free Assets! [CC by-NC 4.0]
Replies: 3
Views: 4992

Re: Taking Requests for Sprites and Backgrounds~! [CC by-NC

I think it would be nice to have sprites with differing body types or sprites for older characters.
by Kiki
Wed Apr 23, 2014 6:04 pm
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: Writing casual relationship
Replies: 16
Views: 2215

Re: Writing casual relationship

Casual relationships do not have to be based on lies and isn't always about sex, and it's a very strange generalization to say they are. A casual relationship is simply a relationship without clear labels or expectations of a future together. Every one that I've seen or experienced has been built ar...
by Kiki
Wed Mar 05, 2014 6:54 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Narrating in a Visual Novel?
Replies: 23
Views: 4387

Re: Narrating in a Visual Novel?

Dialogue should indeed be written this way, but Narration -- in English -- is written in PAST TENSE . Open a fiction book -- any fiction book. Present Tense is only used in Non-Fiction and Dialogue. Not only are some fiction books written that way, as was pointed out, but it can be a useful way of ...
by Kiki
Sun Feb 23, 2014 4:45 pm
Forum: Creative Commons
Topic: 28 Room Backgrounds ( & a few more) [CCA-NC]
Replies: 40
Views: 23240

Re: 28 Room Backgrounds ( & a few more) [CCA-NC]

Thank you for the background and more so for the link to your tutorial. It should prove very helpful for Nano this year.
by Kiki
Sun Feb 23, 2014 3:46 pm
Forum: Old Threads (– September 2014)
Topic: CLOSED
Replies: 2
Views: 439

Re: Writer(s) WANTED

You say at the end this is a commercial game, so you're wanting someone to work for you for free while you make a profit off their work?

How long are each of these conversations meant to be?
by Kiki
Fri Jan 31, 2014 1:28 pm
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: Alexandra's Art!
Replies: 7
Views: 1060

Re: Alexandra's Art!

The first one, the way her arm is bent looks a bit unnatural, more like her arm is broken rather than the bend of the elbow. I really like the last one (lucyyy.png) it looks the most polished. Perhaps a bit more shading in places other than just the face? Thought to be fair, I kind of like it like i...
by Kiki
Tue Jan 28, 2014 8:22 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: XOXO Academy [School Romance] [GxB] [EXO] [Complete!]
Replies: 101
Views: 28938

Re: XOXO Academy [School Romance] [GxB] [EXO-Fangame]

I'm not familiar with the music group, but the customization option is very nice and the mc sprite art is lovely.

May I ask if you are planning to keep the font you're using in those screenshots? It's a bit difficult to read.
by Kiki
Tue Jun 18, 2013 5:00 pm
Forum: Old Threads (– September 2014)
Topic: wanted: Proofreader
Replies: 5
Views: 854

Re: wanted: Proofreader/Editor [free]

Can you tell us about how long the VN will be? (5000 words, 10000 words, etc) That may be helpful for finding an editor.
by Kiki
Tue Jun 18, 2013 2:05 am
Forum: Ideas
Topic: Which VN should I do first???
Replies: 16
Views: 1980

Re: Which VN should I do first???

I assume by Constantine Auro-Cyanide is referring to John Constantine, the protagonist from the Hellblazer comics and a movie named after him. He's a good example of a (not so ordinary) human contrasting with both angles and devils in a delightfully snarky, anti-hero sort of way. He's rather grey on...
by Kiki
Mon Jun 17, 2013 1:15 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Finding My Wings [KN: GxB, Tragic, Drama]
Replies: 3
Views: 2215

Re: Finding My Wings [KN: GxB, Tragic, Drama]

May we have a little more information about the game/plot? Such as who Jonathan is and his connection to Amelia, or what the game is generally about? It being about someone wanting to fly is a little vague. In any case, good luck with this!
by Kiki
Thu Jun 06, 2013 1:32 am
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: How do you plan out your stories?
Replies: 9
Views: 996

Re: How do you plan out your stories?

If I don't plan out a story, it doesn't get finished. I just can't make things up as I go. Personally, I start with a vague outline so that I have an idea of where the story starts, ends and where the major plot points will be. Then as I write the story, I'll flesh out the details on the outline and...