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by justjoe
Sat Mar 17, 2012 9:20 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: HeadSpace, Episode 1: The Mask of Joy [Fantasy][Urban][RPG]
Replies: 10
Views: 2952

Re: HeadSpace, Episode 1: The Mask of Joy [Fantasy][Urban][R

Re-reading the entire topic I noticed you asked for comments including the art. The "speaking sprites' for Isaac and Naru look like pre-teens, not college-age adults (heads out of proportion). If you intentionally made the characters out of proportion for stylistic purposes, please ignore this post....
by justjoe
Fri Mar 16, 2012 12:29 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: HeadSpace, Episode 1: The Mask of Joy [Fantasy][Urban][RPG]
Replies: 10
Views: 2952

Re: HeadSpace, Episode 1: The Mask of Joy [Fantasy][Urban][R

You might wish to reconsider your proposed new name for the first chapter. The Secret Garden is a famous children's novel by Frances Burnett.
by justjoe
Fri Mar 02, 2012 7:50 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Free Love
Replies: 8
Views: 6594

Re: Free Love

I know the story wasn't very good since as I said before, it was written in a short time. I've read some of your stuff, and the stories are not bad. I find it difficult to empathize with the lead characters. Maybe you should consider having a trusted friend (one who will give you an honest opinion,...
by justjoe
Wed Feb 29, 2012 9:51 pm
Forum: Welcome!
Topic: Guestbook
Replies: 5215
Views: 1216858

Re: Guestbook

Hello all.