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Re-reading the entire topic I noticed you asked for comments including the art. The "speaking sprites' for Isaac and Naru look like pre-teens, not college-age adults (heads out of proportion). If you intentionally made the characters out of proportion for stylistic purposes, please ignore this ...

You might wish to reconsider your proposed new name for the first chapter. The Secret Garden is a famous children's novel by Frances Burnett.

I know the story wasn't very good since as I said before, it was written in a short time. I've read some of your stuff, and the stories are not bad. I find it difficult to empathize with the lead characters. Maybe you should consider having a trusted friend (one who will give you an honest opinion,...

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