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Some bg's I drew, any comments and critique are welcome.

bg_appartmenthallway

girlbedroom3

@ SmileyFace those are cute chibis!
@ Pyonkotchi thanks for your feedback. Stiff characters are one of my many problem areas in drawing T_T
Anyone have tips on drawing more natural figures?

@ Abeiramar thanks for the feedback. The girl on the left is just wearing glasses it got a bit dark after I drew the eyes behind the frames. About her dress it's suppose to be a diagonally cut dress, I probably didn't draw that well enough.

Everyone's art is so pretty! I plan to color this so any feedback is greatly appreciated especially on anatomy and pose. Have no fashion sense so the dress are very simple.

I like to read boys love webcomics. Don't know what you think of them though. Some of these webcomcs contains boys love element. Hanna is Not a Boy's Name it's currently on hiatus, but it's really good and has beautiful art. About a paranormal investigator who is not good at his job. Knights-errant ...

@celectis
I like the way you color your character, it's very beautiful. I do have one suggestion, not all part of the piece have the same amount of details and polish, if you could bring all the elements to the same level it would make it a even better piece.

I was born in China, both my parents are Chinese. I am currently living in Canada. I can speak Cantonese and English, understand some Mandarin and read a little bit of Chinese, took French until end of high school, but can't really speak it.

I had the same idea for a wuxia like story. I was thinking to make the interface explicitly show the character's pov and personality. Also I was thinking of having 4 main characters, but only be able to switch between 3 of them (they're all siblings) I don't know how to execute it though. Plus it wo...

@ Deji
I like the color scheme of your cover, it really fits.

@LVUER that's a really cute drawing. I especially like the gray rabbit at the front. And kung hei fat choy to everyone!

Here's another character I am working on. Critiques greatly appreciated. Well he's suppose to be a 16 year old tree spirit?

The new sprites are lovely.

Risingdreams could you give more details about your project?
How many character sprites are you looking for and how many expressions and in what style?

Hi. Here's a pencil sketch of my character, I am still working on her design. She's suppose to be 12 and half-Chinese. Please critique away especially if there anatomy errors. I flipped her and I knows she's horribly skewed, but if there's anything else please tell me.

I can help out with backgrounds. When you have the story down you can pm me.

Just out of curiosity what type of backgrounds do you need and how many?