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Rayvena wrote:Another bump.

I see something about Grocery Store. 2 has put you off.

What is it about this project that warrants your complete dismissal of it? I think we'd make a great team. We could go fishing together.

I see you know your way around the tablet. I am enamored with your art. I need an artist to do odds and ends for my project, Grocery Store. 2: Investment Banking. http://i.imgur.com/CWza9.png Would you be interested in drawing for me a polar bear, powerful businessmen, a strong independent woman who...

In a genre which has adopted as part of its label the moniker of "novel," you have suggested the idea that it should have one layer of meaning. Yes, which is exactly why I'm disappointed. =o The idea was nice, sure, but ideas are worth nothing if the execution isn't convincing. And with execution I...

Applegate wrote:In case anyone is interested, someone did a Let's Play of this.

what

The entire game has the feel of a hastily put together, sloppy work, to be honest. The sprites still retain their guidelines and the interface is basic. There's also no music. If you plan to work on this, I feel those areas could use some definite work. The writing has energy, providing a quick pac...

Is it supposed to be a trash game? =o Oh, wait... why am I even asking? "I am of the opinion that those who open their eyes and ears to its message will have imparted upon them a tearful, lonely truth." Yes, if you open your eyes you can see a lot. In everything . The difference is that in good wor...

To be honest I thought it was a fairly simple story. Guy goes to the grocery store, he and his friend pick up women, he makes friends with the clerk, then they all go home to hang out. People may have expected something... deeper than that. If I'm understanding the comments correctly. That's just t...

Sorry, but I didn't understand any of this story :( I would like some feedback from you here. What part of the narrative was difficult to understand? Was it the exposition? I admit I broke the show not tell rule in the introduction, but that is the folly of such a such a short narrative. To be hone...

I see. Interesting. Well, thank you for your feedback. MaiMai, you can expect works of the same caliber of artistic vision, storytelling, and direction...or higher. Gumm_p0p, I see something about the game put you off from finishing. What exactly bothered you enough about it that you put down a five...

Hi everyone. I'm DeShaun from IDGF Studios. I wanted to present to everyone the first kinetic novel by our group, as a sort of preview for the sort of work you should expect from us in the future. edit: I have taken Ryouko's advice to heart and have created an introduction suitable for the presentat...