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by Coreyrn
Fri Mar 28, 2014 5:36 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: The One in LOVE [NaNoRenO 2014 – All Computers + Android]
Replies: 35
Views: 22987

Re: The One in LOVE [NaNoRenO 2014]

I really really enjoyed this piece of art, thank you for creating it. And did I spot a Blade Runner reference there when refering to the test? :mrgreen: First the positive points: -I really like that the protagonist is so different from the generic protagonists of most VNs, makes him much more memor...
by Coreyrn
Fri Mar 28, 2014 4:49 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: The Tomorrow's Theory
Replies: 2
Views: 4434

Re: The Tomorrow's Theory

I just played through your game and enjoyed it. But there are some points that would need a bit more work. 1.The choices may lead to different endings but all except for the true end are very short and not really needed, the story is so short and you didn't flesh out alternatives so a kinetic novel ...
by Coreyrn
Fri Mar 28, 2014 6:30 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: ███▓▒░ Hammer - NaNoRenO 2014 OELVN ░▒▓███
Replies: 23
Views: 15780

Re: ███▓▒░ Hammer - NaNoRenO 2014 OELVN ░▒▓███

I just love your games and despite the sad story, I had two very great laughs. First when I saw the can of Uncle Mugen's Creamed Corn :lol: I would buy that :mrgreen: Adn when the face of the protagonist was revealed I didn't expect that face :lol: Thanks for giving us that game I really enjoyed it.
by Coreyrn
Sat Oct 26, 2013 7:53 am
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: [Share free storytelling online course]
Replies: 1
Views: 948

Re: [Share free storytelling online course]

To elaborate a bit on that one. Iversity is a joined project of several german universities, though most courses are in English because they are available internationaly. You can register via E-Mail or Facebook if that is more to your liking. the courses are entirely free because this learning platf...
by Coreyrn
Sun Aug 04, 2013 9:05 am
Forum: Other Story-based Games
Topic: Analogue: A Hate Story
Replies: 45
Views: 10438

Re: Analogue: A Hate Story

With permission from the author to work on a Translation Patch for her VN, I can proudly announce that I have finished a German Fan Translation for Analogue: A Hate Story. I don't think the translation is perfect, but hopefully mostly free of errors and I will patch the patch if enough errors are fo...
by Coreyrn
Mon Mar 25, 2013 8:42 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: [Short] The Meadow
Replies: 2
Views: 2490

[Short] The Meadow

After my first VN project failed due to the lack of an artist, I decided to do something with a minimal approach and a very short length to at least finish one project before attempting something bigger. The result is "The meadow" http://imageshack.us/scaled/landing/850/wiese2.jpg It is a ...
by Coreyrn
Mon Mar 25, 2013 2:18 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: The Clown [Short KN] [NaNoReNo 2013]
Replies: 13
Views: 14819

Re: The Clown [Short KN] [NaNoReNo 2013]

Ok, now it worked. :)

Really nice, little game. The atmosphere is captivating and I felt really nostalgic when I heard the circus music.
And I really felt sorry for the friend
It's a bit mysterious, because I see no hints why he or they is/are there. Well, doesn't matter I had fun playing it.
by Coreyrn
Mon Mar 25, 2013 1:26 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: The Clown [Short KN] [NaNoReNo 2013]
Replies: 13
Views: 14819

Re: The Clown [Short KN] [NaNoReNo 2013]

I can't download the Windows Version, it always says "Permission denied".
The Mac and Linux Version can be downloaded but that doesn't help me.
by Coreyrn
Mon Mar 25, 2013 9:12 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: [Short] Eul
Replies: 12
Views: 8431

Re: [Short] Eul

It is a nice little story, the faceless characters give them a kind of menacing feel which works very good in this case. The backgrounds are suitable except for one, the one for the protagonists home has a very low resolution which stands out amongst the other ones. I had fun for the few minutes it ...
by Coreyrn
Sun Dec 30, 2012 11:29 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: The Loop [thriller/puzzle]
Replies: 88
Views: 21922

Re: The Loop [thriller/puzzle]

Really interesting game, I've played through it once on the easiest difficulty...died several times anyway though. The ending is disturbing...<.< The player character with the clown makeup <.< I had to rely heavily on saves because of that but it was a fun and challenging experience. The last few pa...
by Coreyrn
Sat Aug 25, 2012 2:04 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Submerged[SciFi]
Replies: 4
Views: 1672

Re: Submerged[SciFi]

Thanks for the praise and the interest :D I went over the scripts once again with the new spell checking feature and I hope it is free of errors new. Uploaded the spell-checked version and added it in the opening post. My friend promised me to give me the first sprite this weekend, so hopefully I ca...
by Coreyrn
Fri Aug 10, 2012 5:38 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Submerged[SciFi]
Replies: 4
Views: 1672

Submerged[SciFi]

http://desmond.imageshack.us/Himg14/scaled.php?server=14&filename=renpy2012081022504721.jpg&res=landing Submerged is a short SciFi Story about some survivors in an underwater station which are woken up previous to their appointed time. They get in contact with each other and search for acce...
by Coreyrn
Sun Aug 05, 2012 8:27 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Retelling of a Story: Cinderella
Replies: 6
Views: 5640

Re: Retelling of a Story: Cinderella

I am writing this list of things I noticed while playing, so don't await too much structure. :mrgreen: -The title of the window is "Untitled", you should change that to your games name. -One of the Uncles sprites has no eyes, is that intended? -Eva's text is hard to read sometimes because ...
by Coreyrn
Thu Jul 19, 2012 10:49 am
Forum: Welcome!
Topic: Guestbook
Replies: 5531
Views: 3699632

Re: Guestbook

Name - Christian...standard name here xD Location - Germany Website: Just deviantart http://coreyrn.deviantart.com/ Comments - found the forum by chance because I bought Analogue - A Hate Story on Steam, and it provided me with some great games here. And some of them inspired me to start writing aga...
by Coreyrn
Thu Jul 19, 2012 10:44 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Stop! In the Name of Love! [Comedy] [Worst VN Ever]
Replies: 23
Views: 7100

Re: Stop! In the Name of Love! [Comedy] [Worst VN Ever]

Had a really great laugh because of it, thanks for creating that xD

This love fairy is just great xD
Got the Fifty Shades of Grey Ending first...poor guy xD