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by Haze
Sat Feb 21, 2015 8:12 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Our Personal Space [Sci-fi] [Relationship Sim] [Free]
Replies: 71
Views: 49351

Re: Our Personal Space [Sci-fi] [Relationship Sim] [Free]

Finished it not to long ago; I got the "Making it Work" ending. This game was really good! Even though it's a life sim, there are events going on almost every day, meaning I don't feel like I'm grinding to the next plot point. :lol: The mix of serious and fun events felt very realistic. No...
by Haze
Wed Feb 18, 2015 1:02 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Pluvial [Romance, Slice of Life]
Replies: 66
Views: 22688

Re: Pluvial [Romance, Slice of Life]

Yes, the new main menu looks a lot better. Seriously, great job; you really improved it!

Awww...it's too bad the bird(or Birb, as you called it) isn't a cockatiel...ah well. Royalty from the other side of the universe, huh? Sounds interesting. :D
by Haze
Tue Feb 17, 2015 2:11 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Our Personal Space [Sci-fi] [Relationship Sim] [Free]
Replies: 71
Views: 49351

Re: Our Personal Space [Sci-fi] [Relationship Sim] [Free]

Been looking forward to this for a while; glad to see it's out! :D I'm only on month 9 out of 25, but I jut want to say that I'm loving it so far! Sam and Jack(the names I chose) are written very well; I feel like there's no doubt they're a newlywed couple. I'll post more in-depth feedback when I'm ...
by Haze
Sun Feb 15, 2015 10:53 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Pluvial [Romance, Slice of Life]
Replies: 66
Views: 22688

Re: Pluvial [Romance, Slice of Life]

Been watching this project for a while, and I'm looking forward to it! Just want to say the GUI looks nice, though the logo not being centered is kind of bothering me. It's a small nitpick, I know, I know. XD As for the choice menu, is the only thing that changes when a choice is hovered the little ...
by Haze
Fri Feb 13, 2015 9:13 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: (dropped)
Replies: 46
Views: 9573

Re: Fatal Crescendo [KN] [Comedy/Modern Fantasy]

The new main character sprites look nice! Viktor's description made me chuckle. I have a question, though: Viktor's full reference sprite is taking up about 700 pixels of space: how is anyone else going to fit on the screen? If you game is 800x600, only one other person might barely be able to fit, ...
by Haze
Fri Feb 13, 2015 8:50 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: A Simple Act [VN] [Friendship, Tragedy] [1/26/16]
Replies: 18
Views: 17349

Re: A Simple Act [VN] [Friendship; Tragedy] [2/12/15]

Elli's sprite looks amazing; it has a very professional look. Did you do the lineart, and truefaiterman did the colors or something like that?
by Haze
Thu Feb 12, 2015 7:08 am
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: Non-Anime art styles
Replies: 18
Views: 4145

Re: Non-Anime art styles

It's really up to you, and what you want for your game. Personally, I think more non-anime art styles could really help advance the VN genre, and would love to see more VNs in a non-anime style. But it's not about what I, or anyone else, think; it's about what's best for your game, and how you perso...
by Haze
Tue Feb 10, 2015 11:52 am
Forum: I am a Writer, Editor, Proofreader or Translator
Topic: Writer and editor at your service! (Temporarily unavailable)
Replies: 32
Views: 9003

Re: Writer and editor at your service!

Influenza?! That sounds quite troublesome. For your sake, I hope you're able get better soon!
by Haze
Sat Jan 31, 2015 6:11 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: WAKE UP [Short] [Sci-Fi] [14 Endings]
Replies: 11
Views: 5409

Re: WAKE UP [Short] [Sci-Fi] [14 Endings]

Alright, played this game. I felt like it was way too easy: I got the true ending on my first try. Almost every choice has a pretty obvious "right answer" For example, why would you not take the crowbar? You gain a good thing by picking it up, and nothing by leaving it, so it's obvious wha...
by Haze
Sun Jan 25, 2015 8:27 am
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: How to Deal with Shame as a Writer?
Replies: 36
Views: 5556

Re: How to Deal with Shame as a Writer?

Just do the best you can. You have the right to proud of something you create. And this is probably the best advice you're going to get. Good job, Mad Harlequin. :D Learning to be proud and confident in what you create is a process that may take some time, but once you get there, I think you'll be ...
by Haze
Sat Jan 24, 2015 1:35 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: The Walk [Psych][NaNoWinter 2015]
Replies: 74
Views: 32938

Re: The Walk [Psychological][NaNoWinter 2015]

Well, I just finished this, and I have to say it was pretty good! A very interesting experimental project! Response to some of my results: "Daytime indicates that you are extroverted by nature and prefer social interaction." Somewhat true, actually. I usually quite introverted, but get to ...
by Haze
Sat Jan 24, 2015 10:57 am
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: How to Deal with Shame as a Writer?
Replies: 36
Views: 5556

Re: How to Deal with Shame as a Writer?

I feel like my lack of ability to write is holding me back, but my shame over being unable to write keeps me from improving. In addition, I really don't enjoy writing so it's even harder for me to practice-- but I don't want my projects to be hung up because I don't have a writer. If you want to im...
by Haze
Fri Jan 23, 2015 10:32 am
Forum: General Discussion
Topic: The last book you read or what are you reading right now?
Replies: 184
Views: 280438

Re: The last book you read or what are you reading right now

I don't own a Kindle, but if you like anime and stuff, there's surprisingly manga and light novels that are available though the translations aren't always the best from the reviews I've seen. I've read a couple of light novels-- namely the Book Girl series and Sword Art Online. The Book Girl serie...
by Haze
Thu Jan 22, 2015 1:59 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Times Like These[Drama][Alternating POVs][slight GxB]
Replies: 5
Views: 8411

Re: Times Like These[Drama][Alternating POVs][slight GxB]

Your welcome and thanks for clarifying. I kind of half guessed but turns out I'm pretty much wrong. xD Still i liked it! Sorry for the super late reply. XD Since the story was pretty open to interpretation(there's a reason it's kind of vague), I wouldn't say that, whatever you guessed the story was...
by Haze
Thu Jan 15, 2015 5:42 pm
Forum: General Discussion
Topic: The last book you read or what are you reading right now?
Replies: 184
Views: 280438

Re: The last book you read or what are you reading right now

What's Left of Me by Kat Zhang. I haven't read a physical book in a while, but it was good. The concept was interesting--two souls in one body, a hybrid, and the government hunting them down and etc. Oh, I read that book a while ago! I felt like it was alright, and that it got worse towards the end...