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by Haze
Sun Sep 13, 2015 10:45 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Out of Sight [GxB][Supernatural]
Replies: 23
Views: 17982

Re: Out of Sight [GxB][Supernatural]

Ok, I played it; here are some thoughts. I have the feeling this might be a bit long, so here we go! I liked the filtered photos; they were quite beautiful and fit the story nicely. The blurred sprites looked very natural on the backgrounds. I also really like the GUI! It's simple and nice; I love t...
by Haze
Sat Aug 15, 2015 2:09 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: A Day in the Life of a Slice of Bread (SuNoFes 2015)
Replies: 13
Views: 4006

Re: A Day in the Life of a Slice of Bread (SuNoFes 2015)

So, Norbez and I played Sasquatchii's game as part of Two Twins Talk, where we critque VNs and other narrative-focused title with the goal of helping devs grow. Sasquatchii's already seen the video, but I wanted to post it here, as well. We had a lot of fun with the game, but felt it could have been...
by Haze
Mon Aug 10, 2015 7:42 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Must Love Jaws [Friendship] [SuNoFes] [AGBIC 2015]
Replies: 13
Views: 2136

Re: Must Love Jaws [Friendship] [SuNoFes] [AGBIC 2015]

I like the designs of the characters! The only thing is that perhaps there should be some solid lineart around them, because the lack of it could cause them to blend with the game's BGs or part of the BGs. Alright, now for the questions! 1. First impressions in general? (On story, game type etc.?) 2...
by Haze
Tue Jul 21, 2015 4:34 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Three Guys That Paint [BxG/BxB][NaNoRenO 2015] +DLC +ARTBOOK
Replies: 31
Views: 15029

Re: Three Guys That Paint [BxG/BxB][NaNoRenO 2015] +DLC +ART

The series has been completed now, so I'll list the videos for the viewer's convenience: Intro, Day 1 Day 2 Day 3 Day 4 Epilogue Closing Thoughts Thanks for putting the videos here, Katy! I'd also like to add that the Epilogue also includes Morwenna's path-- we went for that path after Terri's. Ove...
by Haze
Sat Jul 11, 2015 9:13 am
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Convenient method for spellchecking?
Replies: 17
Views: 1229

Re: Convenient method for spellchecking?

In editra, do: Edit, Preferences, General, Files, Check spelling while typing. If you don't use a word processor, like Microsoft word, then this would probably be the best method. Like Mad Harlequin said, however, you should have an editor look at your script. There are things a spell checker won't...
by Haze
Sat Jul 11, 2015 9:07 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Cash vs Yandere [Survival|Black Comedy|GxB|GxG] - Up: Horai
Replies: 39
Views: 8765

Re: Cash vs Yandere [Anti-Otome/Black Comedy/GxB/GxG]

The "vs" part of the logo is a bit small, and I think the font color is a bit too light, as it took me a couple seconds of looking at the logo to notice it. Perhaps you should change it slightly?
by Haze
Sun Jul 05, 2015 8:57 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Three Guys That Paint [BxG/BxB][NaNoRenO 2015] +DLC +ARTBOOK
Replies: 31
Views: 15029

Re: Three Guys That Paint [BxG/BxB][NaNoRenO 2015] +DLC +ART

So, Norbez and I are doing a playthrough/voice acting thing/commentary on this game! Katy already knows about it, but I thought we should post it here, too, in case anyone here on Lemma wants to take a look. The video here is Day 1 of the game, but we've also got Day 2 up, and the other in-game Days...
by Haze
Sun Jun 28, 2015 9:57 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Queen At Arms: Deluxe Edition, on Steam Feb 4 (beta testing)
Replies: 313
Views: 50295

Re: Queen At Arms, on Steam this year [GxB][GxG][War][Fantas

That's awesome, you guys! Way to go! I'm sure you've all worked very hard, and you should be proud of yourselves for all of it! :D
by Haze
Mon Jun 22, 2015 9:16 am
Forum: Ideas
Topic: Lost & Found [Updated 6/14/15!]
Replies: 90
Views: 17330

Re: Lost & Found [Updated 6/14/15!]

The GUI is really nice! I like that there are so many choices on what to do for each day. Scrolling up through the thread, I also saw the different stats. They're very creative, and they definitely make sense for a dog to have.

I wish you the best of luck finishing by August 1. :D
by Haze
Tue May 19, 2015 7:32 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Who is Mike? [Mystery/Thriller] NOW ON STEAM!
Replies: 42
Views: 12216

Re: Who is Mike? [Mystery/Thriller,Supernatural, Comedy]

@ Haze: I enjoyed this more than I thought I would! I seriously did not expect this much deep thought/nitpicking for "Who is Mike" lol. I was basically "I have no idea what I'm doing" Dog throughout the whole creation of it. I hope you guys at least enjoyed the game despite the plot holes! ^^; Also...
by Haze
Wed May 13, 2015 9:23 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Who is Mike? [Mystery/Thriller] NOW ON STEAM!
Replies: 42
Views: 12216

Re: Who is Mike? [Mystery/Thriller,Supernatural, Comedy]

Norbez and I recorded ourselves doing a commentary and just-for-fun voice acting for the game. We responded to a couple of ame's replies to what we thought of the game, and made some other comments. This is mainly for Fervent Studios, but we hope all of you enjoy, and please comment! If you have som...
by Haze
Wed May 06, 2015 12:04 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: bond[Drama][Relationships]["KN"][NaNoRenO2015][v1.05 Out!]
Replies: 22
Views: 8814

Re: bond[Drama][Relationships]["KN"][NaNoRenO2015]

As of last night, version 1.05 of bond is up! [url=http://tophat_haze.itch.io/bond] Download bond 1.05 here! [/url] What's in this version: -a game icon -some script changes(i.e using "little one" less often) -a new sound effect at the end, from soundbible.com(I would say what it is, but it's spoile...
by Haze
Tue May 05, 2015 6:36 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Who is Mike? [Mystery/Thriller] NOW ON STEAM!
Replies: 42
Views: 12216

Re: Who is Mike? [Mystery/Thriller,Supernatural, Comedy]

Hey! Just wanted to give my own opinions! :D 1. Did you enjoy the story and characters? 2. How was the pacing of the story? 3. Which ending did you like the most? 4. Did the story flow naturally to the ending? 5. Any general comments? 1. The characters were all fine, but the story was not. Why does ...
by Haze
Mon May 04, 2015 6:29 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: bond[Drama][Relationships]["KN"][NaNoRenO2015][v1.05 Out!]
Replies: 22
Views: 8814

Re: bond[Drama][Relationships]["KN"][NaNoRenO2015]

Alright guys, as much as I wanted to do a Q&A section, I unfortunately didn't get enough questions-- I only got one. So, the update will be out tomorrow, but without a Q&A. See you guys tomorrow!
by Haze
Thu Apr 30, 2015 5:46 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: bond[Drama][Relationships]["KN"][NaNoRenO2015][v1.05 Out!]
Replies: 22
Views: 8814

Re: bond[Drama][Relationships]["KN"][NaNoRenO2015]

Hey, guys! You only have a little longer to give me your question if you have any! I've gotten one so far, and it's a good one, so if you have any questions, PM me or post them here with appropriate spoiler tags. Alternatively, you could tweet me with a question, if that's what you prefer. Remember,...