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Showsni wrote:You can't say "in content;" it's an adjective, not a noun. You could say "The fools who placed me here will regret leaving me content," but it doesn't sound very natural.

I see. okay than how this?

The fools who place me here will suffer for their mitigated methods.

Forgive me maybe I'm bad at explaining this( wouldn't be my first). My revision was based off Mikan told me about my first monologue. That's what I mean by shortening it, because it was dragging on about things not inherently important to the plot. Your suggestion would be good but I think it would ...

Even so, you can still add comment lines describing the sorts of images and visual changes that happen between the text. That's what I do... It's like writing a screenplay. true though right now I should focus on the script sense that isn't fully developed. I'm writing in third person view which is...

If saying when I though of this and try to put it on paper. I'll admit it has been difficult since my literature is low. Ah, yes, that's what I meant. That what you've written on paper isn't exactly what you want... I suggest that the game would have different CGs/BGs for every few lines of text. L...

I first wanted to get involve into media entertainment through witnessing the great works of others. I was inspired by them to do such things. I want to be able to control and manipulate the audience emotions like they do. I have made staple works as prime motivation to continue my work. Videogames:...

*3 minute of silence*
"Back to the drawing board."

I can't really critique it since what you've translated into English probably isn't your vision... But I'll try to, anyway. I think you're giving the player too much information. Like the Quarantine trailer... If I were you, and I wanted to get my players curious about the story, I would just leave...

Hi their I have decided to show my current script for the begging. This scene is a monologue from a character who will not be introduce till later in the story so no visual description. Beginning script { delecetd from the face of earth and hopes to never been seen again}(wait I still have it saved....

I would love to help, but there is no link to the project. Sorry I'm a bit concern about posting it publicly, if want to read the script I'll be happy to pm it to you. Besides the script that's all I have going for this project. I haven't even decide which game engine to use yet. I had some artist ...

Hello every one today I'll like to get some assistance with my script. What I'm looking for is constructive criticism and to know if I accomplish a few thing in writing my script such as detailing scenes and dramatic scenes. Right now I'm taking this a step a time. My first concern is my intro, i tr...

1) Please make sure your projects are ren'ai, visual novel, bishoujo, or anime-related. 2) Posts must have links to relevant work! In other words, DO NOT post something like "Hey, I have this awesome idea for an RPG where blah blah blah, and I need help" UNLESS you can show some progress ...

I see. That's cool thanks. Though I am weary of what to post puplic, It sonly an handful of information. Well since Im still new. I guess it would be wise to post it in the WIP, but I had fear that it wouldn't belong their since I have is a script, no art work or anything else. IN essence I felt my...

Um is it possible to discuss my plot in this forum? I didn't see a thread dedicated to it. (Actually I was just too lazy) I notice a thread though that discuss about how one person wanted the game to play out a certain story format where cause and effect was in influence in the over all plot. Though...

I think you people are worthy enough. Err... Thanks, I guess.... XD Oops I mean trust worthy. sorry Keobas, I'm sorry to disappoint you, but nobody here intends to steal your story. We have many more ideas than we'll ever have the time and resources to bring to life. No disappointment at all my fri...

Oh I see. I think you people are worthy enough. As I said befor my title is an acronym so it meaning lie within the letter use. My project name is: CEIEC Your welcome to try and guess it though I doubt its possible. Here's a few hints. *All the word is English letter oriented.( as i no foreign langu...